Shattering the Crown

Lorna I'm on lunch here at the museum and Good Lord  look what I find.
Another superb write and you don't need stars to align to offer up any lucky reader a touch of class.👍🏼
See you soon bonny lass and I'll reply to your superb message later tonight.
In the meantime my tuna pasta bake awaits!!!! 😊

Lovely write my friend. I so enjoy reading your works of art

A fab rhyme scheme and form , great structure formatting , abstract muse woah.  Kudos!!

plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Ah yes this freedom stuff, isn't it just wonderful. Such a very creative write. 🌹

I don't know if I'm right but I got a sense of sad determination from this...a determination to succeed in the end or at least keep.trying but I could be way off. A great write regardless xx

Just. Absolutely linked. No broken muse, no lost context, everything a poet hopes to achieve, you have achieved in this write. Something to look up to. Just fantastic poetry!

This is not only brill .. you are clearly a whole lot braver than me x

Wasn't aware of this style of poetry. Looks a bit like a double tetractys but the opposite way round. And I guess it is up to the writer how many syllables are on each line so long as there is a mirror image. 
It's a beautifully constructed poem much as I have come to expect from you. Nice alliteration on the first line and "instrumental seams" is a super phrase. You have a knack for imagery and meraphor in your poetry which I really like. Must have a go at this. 

Cheers. I'll give it a go. x