Poem -
Cigarette
The ashes fall to the ground
The way it makes you feel is profound
The smoke conjuring the air
The way you stand there makes people stare
They look at you in disgust
But you just make another cigarette combust
You don't care what others say
As you continue down the alley way
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Comments
VERY cool piece of powerful poetic imagery MEL!!......I could see the entire scene in my minds eye!!..........powerful stuff that speaks directly .......and leaves a lasting impression!!......ALL STARS!! ....well done!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Ahhh Tony bet me to the punch on this one. But I agree, the imagery is astounding. It feels as if something I would read in a book than poetry. Superbly written and awesome effortless structure. I tend to over-complicate my reads so this was very refreshing.