Cigarettes
Started just to be a crutch,
Didn't mind smoking that much.
But then everyday
Is like I used to smoke my life away.
But the i realized I had to stop,
I could feel my heartbeat drop.
Mental death,
Just breathe in that last simple breath.
Cigarettes;
Yeah it's true, they leave you breathless.
Cigarettes,
In the end, you can't pretend
You're addicted.
Negative thoughts blow through my mind,
And the words are not so kind.
People say
it's all in your head-the life you portray.
Cigarettes,
They keep you low,
You just don't know.
It seems to be
The life for me.
I picked one up the other day,
After one year of being away.
I enjoyed,
I started playing again just like a toy.
Feel like dying,
It burns inside.
People wondered about the things I'd hide.
Your life sucks
when you go back and use that simple crutch.
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Comments
great poem I am ex smoker 2 times I quit ones went 11 years with out smokeing then one day I said ok lets have just one so did it was great but it made dizzy one day went to 2 day then on to half pack day I did that for 5 years and hated every day so one day I wanted to quit it took a mouth to try then I went out bout Nicorette gum chewed
every day when I need it it took 2 mouths and then finally i quit that and that was in 1998
and yes I can say today I don't smoke any more and never want to go back ever
Thank you. Congratulations, that is very great to hear. Cigarettes can have a huge impact on your life and can control everything and everyone. I'm just glad you finally quit!
Yes know it a 24/7 thing that’s all you think adout and worry adout
Definitely!
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Very nice choice of words, by the way. Thank you very much!!! ❤