Poem -

City of Angels

Hebrews 13:2

City of Angels
(Hebrews 13.2)

among the lights

bright beveled glass
marble and steel

that rise above the sand
at the edge of the dazzling sea

below the endless stars
that light the waves of honey

abide the blest

their dreams adorned in
saffron  lavender and gold

blind to the angels
who are among them

they   who humbled drift

into the cold  lonely cold
into the night  lonely night

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Mark...

I hope your City of Angels is still recognizable and affordable if people aren't rich...

I hope your living on more than just memories...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Mark Olcott

thank you taking time to read, to comment and wish me well. i just read some of your poems and understand that you are a patriot, you care about people.

i may have failed in the attempt but the poem is intended as spiritually inclined observation. the social and economic forces that shaped and continue to shape the city are subjects i am not able to distill in a poem. even if I properly understood them, i do not have the skill. i reveled in the beauty of the place, was grateful for it, but could not escape the contradictions or ignore the ironies.

the “angels” as you know, are the homeless, aged, the sick, the subsistence poor. the poem is informed by the biblical concepts of angels as strangers appearing in our lives. they, the angels, provide a spiritual opportunity for the “blest”, but the “angels” are for the most part, ignored. the “blest” are somehow or by some measure, indeed “blest”, but in referencing their adornments, the word “dream” is used, not “lives”. i thought to use “lives” but no matter what wealth one has, people are inclined to wish or want for more. the lights, marble, glass, and steel are beautiful, but they are or can be “cold” and will not endure, the sea and stars are beautiful but the sea at the city of angels, is also the repository of ugly refuse and effluents below its sparkling surface, the stars are dimmed by the city lights and waves are honey only in dreams. 

yet, i loved it there, my friends, the people, the streets, bike paths, the alleys, the green and living things that adorn the place, the things to do. however, the irony was always present when i looked out my windows or drove or biked or walked its streets. i live someplace different now. the place is beautiful, but as consciousness requires and blesses, irony in its many forms still attends me. it’s nice to have met you here, i will certainly continue to enjoy reading your poems and postings

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Marion

Mark, there is always something exceptionally poignant and haunting for me in your works, I cannot put my finger on it to explain and it doesn't need explaining...you create atmosphere...a thing I love most about poetry...your poem The Cormorant being one of the brst works I've ever read for the feelings it evoked in me...this too is stunning my friend x

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Neville

I would be both a liar and a cheat if I denied or tried to downplay this little gem .. it really made this reader pause and reflect upon his own all too brief visit many years ago now .. but on reflection, I can still see and feel it as clearly now as I did then through your pen .. 

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Being Me

I one zillion percent agree with every word that Marion has said. Your words weave an emotional story that's sits in the minds eye as a painting. Awesome work x

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Shirley Harrison

This is utterly beautiful, i am a huge fan of  Angel poems, I believe that every special soul has one. Your imagery gave me goosebumps and I can only say Kudos superbly written with an emotional magic. 🌹

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