Clouds (In Memoriam)
Clouds come and go throughout the day
be speckle  skies of blue,
and try to form a barrierÂ
that stops us seeing you
We canât look through the swirling fog
a grey nebulous door,
that hides the sunshine that lights up
this face that we adore
No longer see the eyes of green
that twinkled with delight,
and were the lamp within our souls
Irradiating night.
A smile that formed so easily
imprinted on our mind
Itâs warmth and openness for all
the best youâll ever find
She had a heart that knew no bounds
and  arms that opened wide.
Sheâd take you in without a  thought
and  keep you safe inside
Iâm thinking now and realise,
no matter what we do,
Thereâs nothing on this earth
could  ever cloud our thoughts of you
So let the clouds that come unbidden
cross  those skies so blue,
âCause  Mamma nothing could eclipse
Our memories of you!
Poet note
I wrote this  for my  wonderful Mamma who died just 6 days before this  Christmas and I am still trying to get use to the empty feeling without her
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Beautiful memories Hun You will keep them always xx
(sorry hun but will not show star rating but you know it will always be 5stars!)
Thanks so much Stevie xxx
Oh No!!.....I'm sure my words are not going to help you in your time of grief.....but I will say a prayer to help bring the 'energy/strength to your heart and soul to help you in your thoughts and actions......This is a Beautifully written and VERY moving poetic remembrance/tribute piece.....I can't help but be typical when I say that I believe she would be very proud of you for this write........Pinned for perfection!!.......Lovely words LODIGIANA!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo : (
Your words help much more than you know Tony. I have been so priviledged to have had so many kind and supportive messages and they truly have helped in what has been a sad time. Thank you from the bottom of my heart my dear friend and stay safe and well always. Lodigiana xx
It took me awhile for the courage to read your words, because I knew it would and has beautifully reminded me of my mother. thank you for your words.........Jim
oh Jim I hope that it brought only wonderfully warm memories of that special lady in your life. Thank you so much for reading this piece and I hope you also found some comfort in it. Lodigiana xx Â
Wow, I can`t imagine what you are going through... so sorry for your loss. Such a beautiful and soul struck read. At least we can memorialise it with our pins... Bless you. I wish Peace and Love for a hardship incomprehensible at the best of times.
People have been so kind and your lovely words are just beautiful and I thank you so much for them. Right now it is tough but I expected it to be and with so much kindness around to sustain me I know things will slowly start to feel better.My heart blesses you all so much and wishes you only love, peace and happiness .Thank you .Lodigiana xxÂ
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Wish you a New Year be peaceful and healthy wherever you are.
And to you also my friend..much happiness, peace and only the very best of health. xxx
Mama - Spice Girls (Spice)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIGHBci4JEg
In some way it's ageless.
Thank you for this Yiyan as you say in many ways the words are ageless and say it all. Thank you Lodigiana xx
A beautiful sentimental elegy creative with the clouds theme in metaphor. How lovely with rare green eyes wow. You expressed in a touching "missing her' way. Condolences and kudos for a poem to frame.
pleez do read and comment my newest poem too. Â
Thank you so very much this was a very emotional piece to write. I will be reading your piece . Lodigiana x
Lodigiana my condolences and your memories and poetry keep your loved mum alive and that's the respected way things should be and forever remain in life.Â
Things change and sometimes get better but never truly forgotten.
Take care Lodigiana and again my condolences.
Shaun.x.
Thank you so much Shaun..When I read through a lot of my poems they are actually a little snapshot of what is happening in my life at the time and rereading them bring back many many precious forever memories.
Lodigiana x