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Come Dance For Me

Come Dance For Me

A harried rush of salty tunes
Dancing on sandy dunes
Along foam-kist shore
Chaotic strumming encore

Two heartbeats as one
Luna phasing wanton
Enrapture by the sea
Incited by a melody

Time shan’t intrude
Acquiescent interlude
My heart belongs to the waves
Tis a briny hymn one craves

inspired by Cherie's work....you go, girlfriend
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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

This is such a lovely scene....It reminds me of my poem "Shall I Dance For You?" that I posted a few days ago....I love the idea of being free by oceanside and nature's music all around...Such a powerful image....I had to pin it to feel it all over again.Β  Thank you for your beautiful words, Lisa. xo

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A Lonely Journey

Red!! You're such a romantic soul!!!Β 
That was beautiful!! I mean it. I pinned the heck out of it! (I think I deflated it).Β 
Truly, my friend, that was great!! I loved it.Β 

Matthew.Β 

You go, also, galpal!Β 

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A Lonely Journey

Hey, I only speak the truth.Β 
More, please.Β 
You were like the first person who was kind to me on here, so I will always appreciate you, and be your friend. You're great!Β 

Matthew.Β 

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A Lonely Journey

Yes, I like to be very polite to people as I'm murdering them.Β 
And it is terrible to drown in sorrow, but quicksand is pretty bad, too.Β 
Oh well, life is weird.Β 
Have a wonderful day!!Β 

Matteo.Β 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

What a lovely tribute to Cherie's beautiful poem.Β 
I will respond poetically.

The salty sea envelopes me
It's waves bring passion undenied
They also bring the promise
Of my love soon by my side

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Barry Childs

Such a beautiful poem, Lisa. I can see where Cherie inspired you, but this is yours and magnificent it is too.
Barry x

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Richard Waters

" WHY, NOT ? "Β  :)
You, do have the credentials. After, all. :)
You, can not disguise the inspiration, behind this, one. Obviously.
It, is there. It, is bare. It, is clear. Thanks.Β 
Work, to carry, you. FORWARD.
:)Β  X
P.S. YOU, LIVE FOR....." POETRY " !! Don't you, just ? Giving, so much to others. Much appreciated. I am sure.

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