Poem -
Dance
A harried rush of salty tunes
Twirling on gilt dunes
Along foam-kist shore
Chaotic strumming encore
Two heartbeats as one
Luna phasing wanton
Enrapture by the sea
Incited by a melody
Time shanβt intrude
Acquiescent interlude
Hearts adhere to soundwaves
Tis a briny hymn one craves
inspired by Cherie's work....you go, girlfriend
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Comments
Red!! You're such a romantic soul!!!Β
That was beautiful!! I mean it. I pinned the heck out of it! (I think I deflated it).Β
Truly, my friend, that was great!! I loved it.Β
Matthew.Β
You go, also, galpal!Β
Matty your praise means the world thanks Boy-pal
Hey, I only speak the truth.Β
More, please.Β
You were like the first person who was kind to me on here, so I will always appreciate you, and be your friend. You're great!Β
Matthew.Β
it's best to kill with kindness than to drown in sorrow.Β
Yes, I like to be very polite to people as I'm murdering them.Β
And it is terrible to drown in sorrow, but quicksand is pretty bad, too.Β
Oh well, life is weird.Β
Have a wonderful day!!Β
Matteo.Β
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My Dear Lisa,
What a lovely tribute to Cherie's beautiful poem.Β
I will respond poetically.
The salty sea envelopes me
It's waves bring passion undenied
They also bring the promise
Of my love soon by my side
All my love,
Larry xxx
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Thank you kindly Larry your words touch my heartΒ
As yours do mine!
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Always loving your work.....all smiles
Thank you Lorris.
" WHY, NOT ? "Β :)
You, do have the credentials. After, all. :)
You, can not disguise the inspiration, behind this, one. Obviously.
It, is there. It, is bare. It, is clear. Thanks.Β
Work, to carry, you. FORWARD.
:)Β X
P.S. YOU, LIVE FOR....." POETRY " !! Don't you, just ? Giving, so much to others. Much appreciated. I am sure.
Thank you kindly Richard you are so very generous with the flattery. I deeply appreciate the supportΒ