“Confessions of a killers Knife”
“Confessions of a killers Knife”
while sitting on my thrown, with nothing much else to do,
a thought, plowed through the mind at play,
not often do I thrive, on,(old) thoughts of homicide
but today will be, a very eventful day.
It will be a good day, to simply carry through,
with a murder, not just (one) maybe three,
no less then two, a ritual quite true,
to get the old blade, once again shining.
Its been a while, since I've been down from that shelf,
and dust sure to collect, as expected too.
Thus the prices you pay, when you choose to go stealth,
and life to be lived, by the light of the blood moon..
mine be the life of a precision-ed knife,
once pristine, without flaw and now unused,
been just setting around, retirement bound
and most definitely feeling abused.
When the knife held all the power and glory
those in deed, were the chosen days and nights,
not too many, (back then),would boast,
on wanting to entertain, a long drawn out fight.
Yes, once pristine and without flaw,
and in all agreance too, were the days,
when my pedestal, stood erect, quite high
but now cold enough, to need thaw.
Back then, I was the shiny new authority on the block,
a kid in the candy store cast out to play,
the appearance of blood, when the wound spews its spill,
and the feel, it's not the same, instead better, then the modern day glock.
The yielder, ow no, never the one to be spoken of,
strict directions to follow to the “tee” is what was gave
Many secrets we share and trust me, ones I will take,
quite naturally to my grave..
Confessions of a killer I guess can be easily conveyed,
but catcher in the rye, I am not,
Full adulterated comprehension, of age awareness in tact
but bound to my (sane) endeavors, not in one spot.
Jim
P.S. fictitious piece folks, conveying the thoughts of a murder weapon placed in a state of dormant, reminiscing on its past criminal endeavors........
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Hello Jimmy...
I could feel the coldness of the blade...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
P.S.
I never want to be on your bad side...
:)
Sparrowsong,
Music to my ears when i hear from you my friend and thanks for your visit and the red carpet always to be laid for you....Loved your comment as well my friend, it can be read many ways and i kind got a, (excuse my french), "what the hell." Loved you (poetess and poets) response and as "Deb and the Bee" conveyed, it was just a "character abstract" poem from an in-animated object,(the knife), telling deep dark secrets out loud...You guys are priceless in my book and glad to be back amongst the crew....Jim
awesome write. sounds like my kind of write. Love dark and dangerous poetry!
Thanks a whole bunch poetess, saw a butter knife laying on the kitchen table and decided to give it a little attitude, as well as a boastful past reputation. Could never get mad at you, nothing but love for you my friend.
appreciate the read,
Jim
Ms.Cherie,
I don't have to even explain this piece, you did it for me, quite well...Sure do know how to pick a poem a part, (the right way)....Always were you, to be good at reading between lines and you read this one, like it was written by you yourself.....Loved your break down my friend and if i had to give you a grade, my friend you aced this one with ease and as always am i grateful, not to mention honored, for your presence in my garden my friend.....Take Care Cherie xoxoxoxox
Jim
Jimmy my man, if a knife could talk, this is exactly how it would sound, cold and emotionless, very matter of fact, psychopathic I could almost see a little mouth moving as the knife told it's story. Brilliantly written Sir and very believable.
PS thank you for the PS :-)
Whats going on "Big-Bee,''
Thanks for stopping by my friend and as i was conveying to (your flower), you guys must have known, that i was in need of a laugh today,"because each of you, (strategically) placed that (P.S.) in the right spots, to give me a a side cracking laugh and oh-man how important and (must i say funny), that P.S.turned out to be, which could have been totally misconstrued and the difference made between taken for real or realized as fiction...Perfectly summarized was your words,placed in regards to this piece and when i saw where you had placed your (P.S.), once again i had to (genuinely laugh).. Appreciate your visit my brother and now i know what i have been missing, while away and on the same token, what had been the main reason i gravitated here, you guys and comments, such as what was applied too this poem.....Not one of the comments gave, allowed me to catch a breath from laughter, between each of its reading......Thanks my friend, Jim
Aww!!...you got me!.....Thank God it's just an imagination....I had to breath a sigh of relief when I read the P.S.....wonder what if you didn't write it there.....This is an intriguing write my friend...you always have your way with the pen...Enjoyed it
Lots of love...Roose
Rose,
You crack me up...I started laughing from your comment and couldn't stop and it was,(your comment), that put into play, (the p.s. theory, "what if the (P.S.) wasn't placed there?'" well i am pretty sure, i'd probably be sitting in jail right now, for crimes (not committed). Wow, talking about a misunderstanding but what was even more funny was your response, as if, "o.k. now, whats wrong with this picture."You were short sweet and to the point," in your comment, as though i was a (nagging) bill collector, and you didn't know how to take what i had just conveyed and you wanted to hurriedly get of of the telephone, Thanks for the (serious) laugh, my friend, in fact i'm still laughing, even as i type this comment..You all made my day with the response and in more ways then one.....Trust me my friend, it's fictitious but i loved your demeanor change.....Appreciate that (Super Woman) xoxoxoxo, Jim
Hi Jim Great write that has come from a most
creative imagination words spoken from a knife
that has spilled much blood. Spine chilling imagery
Enjoyed your scary tale
Best wishes Debs
Deb.,
Definitely appreciate your visit to my block and without a doubt,couldn't get no more right than the comment you gave...An ambitious, laid to rest old knife who felt, "old habits do die hard" and felt the need for one last stand, if given the opportunity.......Deb trust me i haven't flipped my lid as (flowers of Purple), felt had transpired,(how funny)..Thank you dearly my friend and i'm sure, we will meet again, although the locations may be different, as i pay the same respect and regards, in my venture, to visit you on your block of poetry....Jim
Hello Jimmy...
You are so sweet...
It's great to see you back...
If you came trick or treating at my door...
I would load you up with...
A bunch of...
Hershey Kisses!
LOL!
Hope you are well my friend...
Hugs and Smiles!
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrowsong,
Doing o.k. my dear friend and you,(without a doubt), is as sweet and kind hearted, as the offered ,(by you), treat my friend and highly respected poetess. Thank you for the welcome back, very much appreciated indeed but hope your songs,(sparrow song), are met with the brightness of the sun and gentle wind kisses, each morning you wake, to a new day....
Your friend,
Jim