Poem -
CONFIDE IN ME
Eternal Sadness...
Internal Madness...
Consumed by pain...
Mentally drained...
Aching with anguish...
The need to extinguish...
Negative drive...
Just to survive...
Another day in the life of depression...
Tortured my soul...
An endless obsession...
At the end of each day...
I lay down and say...
Tomorrow's challenges are not far away.
How can you prepare?
Without cure....despair....
Especially when there's no one who cares...
Well I do...believe me,
So I open my arms...
To those who suffer from depression's dark palms.
Understanding can go a long way...
Confide in that someone...
And turn night in TO DAY!
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Comments
Awesome write Carey! I really love the message in this one!
Val ā„
Love this Carey, I can 100% relate your poetry.Ā
5*s from me
maddison
I love the message displayed through this peom. Very touching especially to those who suffer from depression.
Thanks for all your supportive feedback...always appreciated :) x
perfect lovely and a superb write dear..! loved each line..it has a great connection with depression..!
*5 from me sweetiee..:)
Love
Surabhi
Thanks beautiful much appreciated x:)
great write great message Carey congrats x
Thanks so much Susan x
I Agree this has an understanding of what depression is and a hopeful message. I really love how you gave the end line a double meaning, brilliant!Ā
great write IĀ love this one because i can relae
Thanks for your all your supportive comments...means a lot guys xx :)
excellent piece...with an enlightened hopefulness at the end...loving it.......Michael
Thanks for your support Michael...right back at ya! x
its beautiful and touching Carey...i like it:)
Congratulations on nominations Carey and good luck!!!..Xx