Poem -

The Crack in the Ceiling

The sun shone through a tiny crack in the ceiling,

A streak of laser beam like light,

I lay on the bed revealing my weakness,

The healing warmth penetrating.

Is this a sign?

 my mind was troubled

Am I reading into this, what is not there?

Will God himself come down 

And make me better?

Seems theres more chance of me 

Getting through the crack up there.

I prayed for sun and an escape route,

And now they were there.

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Anthony Lane

God moves when ever and where ever he would like. A small crack will let the sunlight in, but God needs no open entrance. This is a nice little poem and I enjoyed the read, Anthony

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Maggie Allen

Thanks Anthony, nice comment......

It was 'satire' I am a passionate atheist and could not get through that crack.....

Peace.

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Anthony Lane

We all believe in something. You have as much right to believe as I do and I salute that. I chose to believe there is more than this life on earth. I respect your feelings and hope that you have a rewarding life! Anthony ( I liked your poem)

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