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Crimson Observations

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John DeFoore Jr
Crimson Observations

Swirls, deep red swirls
So peacefulΒ 
No hurry,Β 
Yet purposeful

The new still swirls
Crimson
The old pinkin’sΒ 
Defuse’s

Deep roseΒ 
to translucent pink
So hypnotic
My eyes close

I’m so tired
They will be so sad
Maybe this was a mistake......
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Peace Regret Suicide
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John DeFoore Jr

Red death roses ?Β 
odd the allure
thank you
John
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