Poem - 24 January 2018, 04:49

Crimson Observations

John DeFoore Jr

Swirls, deep red swirls
So peaceful
No hurry,
Yet purposeful

The new still swirls
Crimson
The old pinkin’s
Defuse’s

Deep rose
to translucent pink
So hypnotic
My eyes close

I’m so tired
They will be so sad
Maybe this was a mistake......

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐24 January 2018, 05:19

such beauty in the darkness

John DeFoore Jr24 January 2018, 06:28

Red death roses ?
odd the allure
thank you
John

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