Crimson Tide (Avalon)
As Oceans tears fall and its swells collide,
a moment in time sends the crimson tide.
Its waves fall in motion as peaks bleed the shore,
the absence of her rocks the depths to its core.
It throws out all passion in feeling irate,
a cruel twisted outcome desire couldn't take.
As murmuring callings no longer retreat,
seduction lays bare left in utter defeat.
With ongoing torment it ravaged her soul,
the sea payed a price in unearthing its role.
No longer it holds such a heavenly lure,
exposed in the limelight is something impure.
An onlookers view as the sun sets the stage,
a mission uncovered where deep waters rage.
With ongoing insult that silenced her song,
The voice of the Ocean still calls, Avalon.
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Awesome writing, Susan. Simply spectacular!
Pinned this!
Hope you have a fantastic weekend.
~Dean
Wow Dean, thanks so much for such a great review. I hadn't written anything in awhile. You know how it is with writers block. A trip to the beach soon changed that. This is just another addition to my poems on Avalon as you've probably already guessed. You've made my day, blessings.
You're more than welcome, Susan.
I know what moves me and I know what I like once I've read it.
This accomplished both for me.
Have a wonderful weekend, my dear.
~Dean :)
I live close to the sea and your poem really resonates the strength and the power of the ocean that some seldom feel or see. Great write and I could feel what you wanted to convey. Compelling - Thank you
Thanks so much for your review.