Crooked Ole Tree

Rustic church stands by the crooked ole tree,
While vultures circled akin to a posse.
Tarnished bell still peals in the wind,
A forlorn toll to how the guilty sinned.
Stringinβ up an innocent cowpoke,
'Cause he dared to challenge town-folk.
The sheriff the biggest sinner of them all,
Just wanted to see this man crawl.
Rope burns still scar the crooked ole tree,
While vultures circled akin to a posse.
Though the cowpoke expired long ago,
The town still suffers for no mercy though.
Cursin' them with his final breath,
Blight began the moment of death.
One by one the guilty painfully died,
Unrepentant, too full of foolish pride.
Hypocrites that went to church each week,
Praisin' the Lord for the truth they wouldn't speak.
Lettinβ his remains rot on that ole tree,
Danglin' from a noose, swingin' macabre.
Overcast skies remain perpetually gray,
To eternally mourn who died that day.
Slowly the town faded into oblivion,
Forgotten that shameful unconfessed sin.
But⦠wait, there was a reminiscent one.
Weeping for the unspeakable deed done.
If truth be told she was the cause,
He confessed when she broke the laws.
She too afraid to accept the penalty,
She let him hang for her stupidity.
She weeps under the crooked ole tree,
While the vultures still circle akin to a posse.
An apparition cursed to mourn evermore,
Bitter tears,Β not worthΒ dyin' for.
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Hey DARKLY!!.... don't think I've seen a dark western on here before.....VERY creative stuff!!..... you've really been doingΒ a LOT of writing lately....... impressive sweet poetess!!...... fist full-o-stars!!.......COSMO is lucky to have you here!!.... hugs-n-smiles:....... your friend and admirer!!.......T xoΒ Β ?β΄ββ³
thanks Tony. I've been pretty depressed lately. I find that writing helps. my health is failing and I just need an outlet.
What a fantasticΒ story told with DARKLY aplomb!
Anchoring it all to the image of the tree and the church is a masterstroke. It works perfectly on theΒ thematic level as well.
An accomplished piece of work!!
J xxx
Exceptional write again !
Keep up the great work !
Hugs. Β xx
:)
It's brilliant, really enjoyed xx
Wow!!...This is amazing Sweet Poetess...You're a talent indeed