DANCING..WITH MY FATHER !?X R..I.P.
I,VE..JUST HAD A DANCE
WITH MY FATHER !?
EVEN THO.. HE IS NO LONGER!?
HELD HIS PICTURE TIGHT !?
AGAINST..MY CHEST
& FOR HIM..I DID HUNGER !?
TO FEEL ..CLOSER TO YOU !?
I CLOSED MY EYE.S !?
PRETENDING..YOUR HERE WITH ME !?x
I,M ..DANCING WITH MY FATHER !?
ROUND & ROUND..WE GO !?
NOT WANTING..TO OPEN MY EYE.S!?
AS IF..IT ISN,T ..SO !?
TEAR,S ..ARE STREAMING
DOWN MY FACE !?
AS I.. RETURN YOUR PICTURE!?
TO..IT,S RIGHTFUL PLACE !?
WE..LL DANCE AGAIN SOON..I.M SURE!?
WHEN..I NEED YOUR LOVE!? SO PURE !?x
SO..I,LL KISS YOU FOR NOW !?
& THANK YOU ...FOR MY DANCE !?
& PUT YOU BACK !?
IN..YOUR RIGHTFUL PLACE !?
HERE..WITH ME !?
RIGHT UNDER..THE TELE !?
SO.. I CAN LOOK AT YOUR FACE !?
ITS..THE NEAREST SPACE
FOR YOU DAD !?X
HERE WITH..YOUR TRACE !?
LEAST YA CAN NOW HERE THE TELE!?
WITHOUT ALL US NOISEY GIRLIE,S
LOVE YOU !!
YOUR PROUD DAUGHTERXX
Tracy Timothy xx
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As I read down Tracy, I could feel my eyes welling up, gave me tingles!! A beautiful piece Tracy, great job! Any poetry that can move someone like that is deserving of a nomination!! Voted and most definitely faved:)
WOW. X THANKS SO MUCH RACHEL X PAINFUL SUBJECT FOR SURE
Very touching Tracy, I have 2 daughters, your old man would be very proud :)
THANKS JASON X NICE OF YOU TO SAY THAT
CONGRATULATIONS TRACY :)
BIG THANKS HUN X
lovely emotional write Tracy he's so proud cheers x
I also lost my dad and definitely teared up at this! Good job!
it,s very sweet of ya x painful too as you know
bless ya x i hope so susan
Love for one's father is a special thing. The bond between the father and daughter is as strong as any. I really enjoyed the dance and it was a story well told. Thanks for being so personal and letting us in on your inner feelings! The Shaker
thank you so much anthony for your kind words x glad you enjoyed it