Poem -
Darkness
My days seem dark,
life falling apart,
darkness decending leaving its mark,
the confusion of when did this start?
I have never felt this alone,
in a sea upon thousands I was lost,
no one seems to hear my desperate tone,
hidden behind a mask my sadness is tossed.
Dying day by day but never dead,
those slivers of good, memories of light
Are those creations Iāve designed in my own head?
In a box it escapes I struggle to hold on tight.
Can I survive this for the rest of my life?
Will I be able to maintain this fight?
Am I the causing factor of my strife?
I am rapidly losing my light.
Ā
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Hi MICHELLE!!.....I pray that this is a fiction but somehow I intuit as a truth!!...... the darkness and the lonelinessĀ are too well conveyed to be anything else!!...... Delivered with a fine sense of rhythm and timing this poetic tragedy is V ERY well crafted......I think you have come to the right place.... this is a very cool community of writers where friendships and writing collaborations are born frequently!!!....I hope that writing this gave you some sense of relief .......do keep writing dear poet sister..... you have a 'way with words' that speaks with authority.......ALL STARS!!....... well done..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?ā“ā¤
Hi, thank you! I think Iām really going to enjoy being here :)
Hi Michelle.
this is a well written bit of verse.
i relate to it as well.Ā
Hi there, very powerful and emotive write! Felt every word abd sincerely hope that its fictional but as Tony said, i feel some truth to it.Ā Always remember someone is always listening including me.Ā Great write.
Thank you for taking time to read and enjoying it!
Deep poem. Your talent to write is the light that is shining bright. Good job.
Michelle,Ā
What beautiful writing. I mean, sad, but I can so relate. I understand what you're feeling.Ā
Great job.Ā
Matthew.Ā