Poem -

Dawn

Dawn

The sky twinkled in that orange shade,
When all the beasts of calamity are asleep
The soft and furry nature sprouts its wings,
Ready to soar to a new beginning.

But little does it know,
These beautiful colours displayed,
The lovely orange pinky clouds,
Will soon be poisoned by dull grey.

When all the dark beasts wake that day.
They send the sky once again,
To its acting slumber.

Our life resumes yet all else sleeps,
In wait of opportunity,
To spread its wings, 
And fly once more.

That is the life.
Of the golden sky. 
Shackled to time 
And left to die.

Until once more the beasts do sleep,
And allow this splendour to shine. 
This lovely golden light,
That watches over all.
The Dawn Sky.

 

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Mitsali Fatima

Awesome write Sammar! (I am not being biased)
I love the use of colours and imagery in this!
All stars :)
 

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Tony Taylor

What an interesting way to paint the "Dawn" with words......VERY creative stuff dear poet sister (brother?)...... anyway, I haven't read you before.... I'll keep my eyes open!!...... enjoyed!!.......T xo 🐧✴❤

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Mitsali Fatima

That's my sister lol 
I swear I didn't help her :)

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Tony Taylor

Oh!! Cool!!.....I thought about it at first..... and then I was like NAAAH!!!...No way!!..... Go figure!! (smiles)......thanx for giving me the heads up!!.... you go girl!!.....Sammar that is!! (more smiles).....T xo 🐧

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Sammar Fatima

Thank you for your kind words. I've read some of your work and its really inspiring! 

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Dmitri Rudder

Dawn and dusk are both beautiful in their own ways. Dawn, beginning and renewal; Dusk, a long sleep, and ending and promise of beginning. The only difference between the two is the colors by which the world falls in and out of slumber, whether the rosy hues of dawn, or the deep lavender of dusk...

Lovely Imagery Dear, Keep writing,
Dmitri

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Sammar Fatima

Thank you for your opinion and your encouragement Dmitri. I try my best to keep writing as often as possible but, unlike my sister, I'm not good at it and it takes me much longer to come up with a good poem : )   
 

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Dmitri Rudder

And who, praytell, says you're no good? I think that you have a wonderful style of writing, and that, even if It takes you days and days to find something to share, you should. Everyone has that gift, Sammar. Remember that. We will love anything you share with us, even if it isn't necessarily perfect in your eyes. Don't be afraid; we don't bite - much - : )
And, yeah, your sister IS pretty good at this, but, you know what? Show her Up. +1 Her. Show the world that you are just as amazing. I believe in you Sammar. Show me the fire you keep inside you.

Here's for thought : )
Dmitri

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Mitsali Fatima

Awe! You think I'm pretty good lol
In my opinion, my sister has always plus one-ed me!
I think she's pretty cool :)
#proud 

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Dmitri Rudder

I would hope so Mitsali. If you didn;t believe so, I might just be forced to disown you... Jk, couldn;t live without you girl.

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