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De-evolution

De-evolution: sequel to my 1988 tune - Evolution

(A)    Look from whence we came
    In the days of eighty eight
    Violence and gore
    On television you were
    Forced to appreciate.

(B)    To populace came the Internet
    New people who'd never met
    Friendships crossed the globe
    From bedrooms would elope
    Illusion (istic or fed) dreams as pedophiles do grope.

(7.41)    De-evolution
    As the sheep's mind fades to grey
    De-evolution
    Pulling their own wool down over their eyes.

(C)    The overseers do prey
    As the suckers hear them say
    "We'll take care of your tasks!
    Just let your brain relax!" - heh
    The Illuminati shall lighten your day.

(D)    2 plus 2 equals - who cares??
    As the sheep's flock, stands still and stares
    Faith'n'trust'n'greed'n'lust
    Appetite, hunger and just
    The cupboards of the mind laid bare.

(7.42)    De-evolution
    The resurrection of the Dark Ages
    De-evolution
    Burn the witches who raise our wages
    De-evolution
    As the sheep's mind fades to grey
    De-evolution
    Pulling their own wool down over their eyes.

(E)    they take away our need to think
    give us buttons to operate
    trans-thought free, we eat and drink
    the cellphones cheat, to graduate.

(F)    but we've got the time
    to end the destruction of our minds
    must think for ourselves
    exit the circular hells
    forged by the kings of mountains
    trying to control the mental fountains
    dictating what'n'where we say
    so they may have their way
    stand so steady on your beliefs
    boycott them - feed their griefs
    and the human race may prosper
    instead of only the companies.

(7.43)    De-evolution
    Continue to change and grow
    Re-evolution
    Not only companies may know
    Revolution
    The human race must set the pace
    Evolution
    The customers always right and the companies are OURS!
    
Lyrics by Ryk John Miller Thekreator July 2207

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Georgina Richardson

This is a superbly written piece and it flows beautifully, keeping the reader wanting more. There are so many things you get the reader thinking about, well done honey, I really do think you are talented and a great addition to the writing world. Well done, I`m looking forward to reading all your work so keep those fingers dancing for us all. Love to you. G xx

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Ryk John Miller...

Ooops.  I'm new here and still learning everything.  I replied OUTSIDE of your message.  Doh. :o  Tis below. :)  I'm sorry about that. :o

Respect.

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Ryk John Miller...

Thank you very kindly G! :D
The original of the two - Evolution - I'd written in very early '89.  I was especially disturbed back then, by things that I was seeing on television, that I felt then (age'd 25) could be bad influences for the younger ones, glued to the TV. :o
This one, took something of a look at what has happened since in the almost 20 years since the first one was written.  A lot more disturbing.  Taking into account, other influences that have happened over the years (including the Internet) and where things have come to be.

Only my personal observations and grumbling, but ...

To get back to where I meant to be replying - thank you for your commentary on the flow of it as well as the feeling of it causing a reader, to wish for more to read. :D  That, is a compliment, that I've never had in my ... (age showing again. Haha.) ... 40 years ... of lyrics writing. :o
As well, a warm thank you for feeling that I've talent. (simu-blush).  I try not to tell myself that.  I just carry on, creating this and that to hopefully please myself at least.  If others I do, then that, is a wonderful bonus. :)

Respect. :)

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Georgina Richardson

You`re very welcome sweety, I`ve read all your work and enjoyed all of them, so get writing as I want more from you. I meant every word I said about your work, you are very talented so look in the mirror and say my words to yourself every day. Love G xx

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Ryk John Miller...

I few more posted, more than likely, since you last writ. ;)  Varying wildly in subject matter.  They aren't always worded as creatively as I so enjoy doing.  At times, rushing to get the point out, to be heard.  (At almost all times, by only myself.)
I DO appreciate what you've said!  But ... with the 'mass' of ego that I maintain deeply inside, letting out as little as possible, gandering into the mirror saying such, wouldn't be the best, I'm afraid.  Past minor similarities haven't always had the best outcomes. :(  (My last name (legally changed in April 1999) being one of them. :-/

Though, still, appreciated.  Thank you. :)  
Again, respect.
 

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