Poem -
Demolition.
Demolition.
L.Robbins.
You’re the train that left it’s track,
Ploughing furrows, deep and black.
In your head and home alone,
Too much cancer on your phone.
And I hate to watch you
stall,
But I love it when you
call.
I can’t fix what it isn’t broke,
Like those thoughts you never spoke.
Feel the rush and ride the night,
Speeding highways, fleeing the light.
And I hate we run this
race,
But I love this wrecking
place.
People-watching of every hue;
Pink, brown, black and blue.
Break tradition, not go back,
When we’ve crashed and left the track?
And I hate you when we
fall,
‘cause then, I want you
more.
ली
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Comments
Relationships can be so tricky and we cannot help who we fall in love with, or how deeply we fall. I like this poem of yours, there is something about it. Edgy and raw x
They are tricky indeed...Thank you kindly for the read and the feedback...??✍?...
Wow begins in creative metaphor on jilted love perhaps and it's such a rap rocking beat and super flow it like reads like rock n roll, rolling off the tongue so smoothly. Kudos for a fab poem, so many face loves tricky probs but only a few can write about it.
pls pleez do comment on my newest poem too.
Glad you enjoyed the read and the vibe of the poem. Thank you for your feedback.????