The Demon's Pursuit
Levitating above her bed ,trying to block the demonic voices in her head
Many days of sorrow and unrelenting fear
Priests have tried to cleanse her body from this unholy beast
They kept coming back but it was a fight they could not win
This demon is laughing, giving them hell
her soul is writhing from a pain with no relief
Lying upside down she cannot even see her mom and dad beyond the bed at her feet
her eyes are blinded from light ,buried deep in the darkness
Listening to their soothing voices which tries to warm her heart
Lingering in limbo trying to only think of Godly things
her body has finally given up her soul
To the demon who has taken everything in his evil pursuit
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Hey Rock, Lovely Chilly write. I loved this lines
"My eyes are blinded from light ,buried deep in the darkness
Listening to their soothing voices which tries to warm my heart "
Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
hey cleo thanks. i loved the picture and the story wrote itself. i am starting to branch out into more creative writes that keeps the reader alert and wanting to read more. thanks for your comments. hugs to you. rock
Exorcism required. This is a chilling write that points all to cases where demons have invaded a body.
Horrific in the extreme.
Evil will always be forced out by goodness as long as good intervenes. Evil only prevails if good does nothing !!! This is another great write where you make so much capital from an image drawing the reader into a scene.
Love your work !
Hug. :)
Hey Richard. The girl in this picture was so far gone . She was beyond saving . The demon has been attacking her for a year in my story before he finally takes her soul for good. Glad you enjoyed this write. I had fun with this one .hugs to you rock
A terrible fate.
Great poem about appalling events. Best wishes.
Hey Richard . Glad you enjoyed . I had fun with this write . It took on a mind of its own hugs to you rock
:)
In the absence of prayer by faith and fasting.. Demons thrives... Thought provoking... Good write HRL..
Hey wilford. Glad to see you on my page. I saved the picture and the story wrote itself . Glad you enjoyed. Cheers bro. Rock
Yo Rock awesome write bro, and I am curious what your inspiration for this because my dark side of writing screams this was right ip my alley, and this was the first time I've seen you attempt this genre. Well done man I have written a ton of these writes, I have such a weird fascination with the demonic stuff as in movies and shows. If you haven't seen insidious that is great, the first two were kick ass the third is good. Keep it up Rock your killing it lately man, so impressed
Hey Devon the picture I saved yesterday and had some lines in my head As soon as I looked at it . The inspiration was from many things music disturbed down with the sickness and from TV shows like ghost adventures and movies to I have watched from the past . Glad you enjoyed this write. I am trying to broaden my genre get better with each write. Cheers to you bro rock
Im glad you are trying different things man, it shows how passionate and serious you are about your talent and im a huge fan of that and your writing. I took that approach when I started writing on here and read everyones writes to get ideas asked advice from others read old poets and let my talents infuse wi y h my imagination and all the inspiration and over time you can see how far you come with your talent. Keep it Rock you are on the right path, always your friend D.
Hey Devon .thanks for all your support. I appreciate it . Your friend rock
HRL, this is good my friend, I enjoyed your approach to the unique subject matter, your style of writing I quite enjoy, the narrative is cool, emotionally detached and highly descriptive....a very dark and captivating write, you certainly suspended my disbelief...this is quality work my friend...cheers
Hey Chris. Glad to see you on my page. Your comments are amazing. I put alot of thought into this write with the picture guiding my words . I am trying very hard to write out of my genre and create different stories. Glad you enjoyed this write. Cheers bro.rock