Poem -
THE DEVILS GUEST
Boredom brings me discontent
Discontent...my life is spent
Spent no cash to pay the rent
Rent is now 4 months behind
Behind I leave no trail to find
Find a job, a friend, a wife..
Wife has left...she won't be back
Back to square one..start again?
Again I say when will this end?
End my discontented life
Life now only leads to strife
Strife hands me this kitchen knife
Knife deeply enters my body
Body needed a somebody
Somebody put my soul to rest!
Rest in peace..
The Devils guest...
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Comments
So glad you saw it all hun...Wish you lived in Australia to come to my 40th in 2 months...How is the Jacuzzi poem coming along hun:)?
Its really awesome..each line connected to the other so well..it links to the other..:)
Another great one Carey..!! :)
Love
Surabhi
I've never seen a poem like this before! Definitely awesome! To the above comment, I wish I was living in Australia too. I've never been but I just feel like I'd love it.
Carey Milton
Powerful lines, Good. Â thanks for sharingÂ
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Aww shucks lol I am feeling so inspired right now and I owe it to all of you...don't mean to sound cheesy lol
I must say I like to give individual comments in respect to those who inspire me...keep em coming guys...(I mean your work)! xxx:)
Congrats and my applause on your winning nomination dear Carey Milton.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Love this Carey, just brilliant!
Maddison
Cheers Maddison!.. glad to see you back! x
Big 5*s Kylie excellent write, you have a similar warped mind to mine :)
A warped mind is hard to find... thank ya Jase....your words are kind...:P x
Jeffery...Australia is awesome!...I wish I could invite everybody!...You know what...Your all invited! :P
Thank you for your admiration on seeing something a little different...I strive on different!! xx
A great pice well done. Love G xx
Thanks so much Faith and Georgina...This write just get plummeting lol...was a fun write..always appreciate your comments x:)