Poem -
Diablo
Menacing sneer with these chains held so tight
My diabolical eyes flaming red in your sight
Collecting the unwanted , the left for dead
My huge hands crushing everything you hold so dear
There is no chance to escape your fear
I am evil I am in command
Proficient at destroying all in my wake
I cannot accept nothing less than defeat amist the weak
Marching to end life as we know it with no end game to be found
You will bow or be killed at my feet
For I am diablo wicked is my trait
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The diversity of your poems is expanding your skills ! You are writing with more and more confidence and you are putting so much thought into them ! Your works are a must-read with an anticipation always there of what you will produce next !
Love your style !!! Keep 'em coming !
Wishing you the very best ! :)
Hey Richard thanks . If more people like you would comment but I m grateful for your sweet words to inspire me to do more writes . Thanks for all your support. Your friend rock
Your work varies from fantasy to horror to traditional love poems to messages of belief ! Your range is inspiring !!!
Keep up the good work ! :)
Best wishes.
Thanks Richard. I will .feel my hug .rock
I do ! :)
Thanks.
:)
Wow Rockstar!!!.....this just moved up to my favorite "Rock Write"!! (smiles)........this will sound a little odd.......but........when I read the end of the line ".......the left for dead" ~ I knew right then I was going to like this........You have some fantastic images crawling through this piece........well done bro!!........ALL STARS ........you really ARE kickin' ass at these "picture interpretive" pieces...........later..........T xo
Hey t thanks for cool friggin Comments . I am trying really hard to write with different wording and phrases to pull the reader in and keep them there . I wrote another write called as the leaf falls below the other day . I would like for you to check it out and see what you think . Hugs to you. Bro. Rock
Yo Rock I enjoyed this one and I agree with T, you got a knack for coming up with a story by simply looking at a picture. The pic is pretty cool too. Hennis has some good advice man it might help a little woth some of your writes, but hey im just a friend and you know what's best for you. Much respect for you bro.
Hey Devon . I appreciate the comments and will continue to keep writing the way I want too. I respect people's opinions but I like my writes . I am not going for the gold just good quality work. Everyone seems to like it. Everyone needs to look at poems as a whole . As the leaf below I wrote was one of t 's favorites and not many comments . Hugs your friend rock