Poem -
Did You Ever Think Of Me?
Caution: contains a swear word
She's not the angel that you think,ย
All the words she says are lies,ย
She's an ugly mother fuckerย
As a princess in disguise.ย
And I hate the way you held her
When you met her by the seaย
And though it's well long over
I still hate the secrecy.ย
You told her that you loved her,ย
You leaned in and kissed her,ย
You touched her and caressed her
And longed to be beside her.ย
But in all those times
When you met her by the sea,ย
In all those secret, sordid times,
Did you ever think of me?ย
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Comments
Brilliant!!
Hi MB,ย
Sorry to interject, but I just wanted to say thank you to Jill for that comment about me...oh...wait, were you talking about the poem??!! Dang! (I didn't think anyone would call me that! One guy called me Dorktastic, which was my fondest comment, besides Loonlegs).ย
Anyway, I agree with your assessment of the poem then, Jillian, and thank you for the almost compliment to me.ย
M.ย
Eeh I always compliment your marvellous poetry ?โค๏ธ?โค๏ธ
Yes you do, young lady, and I'm just kidding.ย
Thank you for always complimenting me, and for being such a fun, nice friend. Matthew.ย
Awwww haha@ young lady pml I wish ?โค๏ธ?โค๏ธ
Aww thank you Jill. That is so kind of you. Glad you liked itย x
I did brilliant xxx
Hey Jillian,ย
I love the way you don't use punctuation, or capitalization! It's so confusing, but it makes our minds work. Mint! Wintergreen, please. M.ย
Teehee ?โค๏ธ?
Hi MB(I switched it around there, as even though Marionette contends that BM means Blood Sugar, and is calling you Sugar, I believe she is secretly trying to drive me crazy by making me think of a disturbing human function every time I see you). lol,ย
That was beautifully, heart wrenchingly, written. I could feel your pain in every line. Terrific writing, MB. I loved it. You're a really talented, emotional writer. And I thought it was cute how you said 'contains a swear word.'ย
Great job!ย
Matthew.ย
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If I can interject...PMSL...Matthew, you complete header..lol...and you can't call poor BM...MB, poor thing will get identity problems and it will be all down to you...do you want that on your conscious...do you? Do you??
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How shitty is that!ย ?ย ย (You do make me laugh.. Lol)ย
Thank you, Matthew, for the lovely comments regarding this poem. It is really sweet of you and I am humbled by them.ย
I just thought it best I warned any potential readers about the swear word in case there are any whoย hateย such things in a poem... Then they don't have to read it.ย
Thanks again x ?
Hi MB,ย
What a nice person you are! And a beautiful writer. I'm glad I met you. If you want to become a part of our little group(we're called Cheerie's Angels), you're so welcome. It involves Cherie, Marionette, Jillian, Gregor, and sometimes Loki, Terry Kay, and whoever else I forgot. We have fun, and do wacky contests, and have special days at the Cosmo office, like Loin Cloth Tuesdays(on every third Wednesday of the month), Naked Fridays, and Bring Your Yak to Work day. It's fum...in a weird sort of way, but we like you. And you're a terrific writer(which is why I'm named in the 'One Of These Things Doesn't Belong song that we sing before each meeting). LOL.ย
You're great, MB.ย
Matthew.ย
Wow! Now that's an invite I can't refuse! I would be honoured to be part of the group... Yay!!ย
Alright! Thank you, and welcome to Cheerie's Angels. We're having a meeting on Thursday at Benny's House of Slacks. Could you bring some mutton? Even though I'm not sure what that is. Thanks! M.ย
Mutton?ย That's sheep meat hahaha x
Oh...well, that's not good. How about some Spam?ย
Thank you!!ย
M.ย
Oh, and the meeting's been changed to Willie's Shiv Palace in Yonkers. Be there early, it's at 7:30PM yesterday. Thanks!ย
Spam? Eurgh!
7.30pm yesterday... Cool ???
Yes! So be there on time! And if you could bring some refreshments, like Chicken Squeezins and flavored corn syrup, that would be great. Cheerie is bringing braised mushrooms, in a light mushroom sauce, with a side of mushrooms(she's obsessed). Jill is bringing 325 dishes she whipped up in 11 minutes, Marionette is bringing sqwackle, and I'm bringing my appetite, so it should be a good feast, or feets...whichever comes first.ย
Thanks for being fum!ย
Matthew.ย
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wonderful poemย
Thank you Greg! I'm glad you liked it x
Love it ?, rockย
Glad you like it!ย Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it is truly appreciated x
Excellent write BM....honest and truthful and real and so so relevent to most of mankind I should imagine, IV certainly been here...though...not by the sea ??
Awwwย ย thank you, Marion! I'm sorry you have been in a position to be able to relate to this. As I am sorry for anyone who has ever been in that position. It's a horrible, horrible place to be. Thankyou for reading and for commenting x
This was a most enjoyable read, and you are truly gifted at writing. Lovely flow and the message throughout just pulls at the heartstrings. Amazing pieceย
Wow! Thank you so much for your high praise. I just love writing. And I love reading the fantastic work that people such as yourself post on here. Thank you for reading and writing a lovely comment. Thank you too for the pin! I am so happy that you like it x
Cool poem. Nice rhyming.ย
Enjoyedย - Sydย
Thank you, Syd. I appreciate you reading and it was kind of you to leave a comment x
My Dear Being Me,
Another very powerful write, that takes the reader deep into a broken heart.
The tide brought in a Siren
A temptress, seeking a man
My true love was on the beach
And to her side he ran
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She beckoned him to hold her
Then he kissed her tenderly
He told her that he loved her
Did he ever think of me?
All my love,
Larry xxx
???. Oh Larry... Your poetic response is spot on! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving that little gem of a comment x
A beautifully written poem BMย
Awesome work! x
Your poem put me in such a mood you know I was feeling it and stuff then I read the comments underneath and burst out laughing I'm sorryย Oml XD
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hahaha...that's what I like about this site, its sense of community. It's nice to have a laugh!ย
Thank you so much for reading and I am glad you like the poem. And happy that some of the comments people posted made you laugh...that's good!ย Thanks again x
Straight to the point & brilliant x
Thank you so much!ย Thanks for reading and thanks also for commenting? It is greatly appreciated x
I know I think of you !ย Your such an awesome writer.ย You provide me joy everything you write โ and everytime โค you grace my page
???ย Love your comment, Greg! That is very kind of you to sayย ?ย I thought your poem earlier was very good too...?
Glad you like what I write ! It might spur me on into actually writing something else ?
Thankyou, dear friend, for reading, for commenting (and for thinking about me) ?ย ย xโ
Impeccable!!ย
Thankyou!ย I appreciate you reading and your comment. Stay safe and well x
Being Me!ย
Great write....the imagery raw and the anger is born of pain and disappointment.ย Definitely been there and the slow recovery back.
val
Aww thankyou for reading Val. It is so sad that a great many of us have to suffer the pain of heartbreak. I'm sorry that you, too, know this. Keep safe and well x
a brilliantly epic masterpiece. well written!
Haha..I wouldn't call it an epic masterpiece lol but thankyou anyway for such praise (albeit undeserved). And thank you for reading, I truly appreciate it. Keep safe and well x
Unselfish action, or thought process, defines the traits of inner worth. And, meticulous detailing of capability and ability, to promote realization, of connection. Between souls, as well as between us and core values. From instinctive " breath " and, acceptance of death.. Born, of industry, education, and travel. Time, accommodating the energies of transformation, to make more of space, and place.
You, show the " identifying " comforts of self-examination. With, relationship, to the principled injections of " being, " progressed by belief, in bettering oneself, and, ones " soulful intent " ! Away, from mere trifles of fancy-free conjecture. Sourced, from within the era, and age, you find yourself, involved with.
Great response to the trivial concerns. To give, and to live. With, hope, as well as promise, to guide. Blended, within truth. Which, matters. Obviously.
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Thankyou very much for reading and for your detailed comment, Richard, it is much appreciated. Stay safe and keep well x
My goodness you're really rocking this site I'm just sorry I haven't popped by untill now!
Why thank you very much, Simon!ย Thankyou so much for dropping by my pages here...I am honoured to have you read my work and like it... Thankyou x
wow absolutely phenomenal!
Poetess, THANKYOU! I am honoured you think this x
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