Poem -
Did You Ever Think Of Me?
Caution: contains a swear word
She's not the angel that you think,Β
All the words she says are lies,Β
She's an ugly mother fuckerΒ
As a princess in disguise.Β
And I hate the way you held her
When you met her by the seaΒ
And though it's well long over
I still hate the secrecy.Β
You told her that you loved her,Β
You leaned in and kissed her,Β
You touched her and caressed her
And longed to be beside her.Β
But in all those times
When you met her by the sea,Β
In all those secret, sordid times,
Did you ever think of me?Β
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marvelous
Hi Shamk...thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment! I really appreciate it and I am glad you like it x
Your welcome being me . I have learned we should appreciate good things??
Thank you again... I will, of course, pop over to your page later and read your work x
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Absolutely fantastic, my friend. I Wonderful writing!Β
Hi Ezrarimbaud,Β thank you so much! Thanks for readingΒ and for leaving a great comment. I am happy you like it and appreciate your support. I shall pop over to your page later, to read your work x
It was well worth both. Keep believing! Youβre a great writer and all we need is a little confidence and we get there in the end :-)
Thanks again, my friend x
Just seen this appear in the feeds. Wow an exceptional write Being Me! The last line makes me think too.Β
I must read some of your other writes I think you are a fabulous writer and that's just from what I read last month Px ? ? still love the hot lips one ?
but definitely sssoo pinne this one too x
Thank you so much, Pratibha!Β You are very kind.Β The hotlips one ???? glad you still like it!Β And I am also happy that you like this one too. Thanks for reading, commenting and for the pin ?? I appreciate your support, my friend x
Fuck ..Β
I know a couple of bloomin good hit man .. Sshh, don't say anything, just nodΒ and maybe then we can go for a picnic somewhere ...........................
sorry I forgot to mention the cuss word before my fingers got the better of me ................ so was that a nod or what .............Β Hearts are rendered for far less .. Well articulated, to say the very least .. N :) xΒ
So was it :)
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Hahahaha...omg...I have only just seen this awesome comment π€£π€£π€£π€£Β oh please forgive my late reply.Β As always, thanks for reading and for leaving such a brilliant comment π₯ͺππ₯π₯£π» x
Apologies for missing this one Tina, but one now unearthed andΒ one that raises the benchmark on betrayal and a third parties thoughts on that matter.
And love/lust is truly blind, for the grass is never greener.
A superb write on matters of the heart and its unwanted hidden baggage.
No subject matter evades you andΒ write so uniquely in all that you offer and share.
A true spellbinding poetry gift.x.
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Apologies for missing your comment! I'm genuinely so sorry. Thankyou for reading xx
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