The Captain Said ...
On a night where the air hung sultry still
by the harbour, there, with his girl walked Bill.
Down he fell upon one knee
and he asked his love, "Will you marry me?"
But, his love, she pulled him up to stand,
"Bill, I cannot give to you my hand,"
she said, "I tell you now I've not been true —
for I am in love, but it's not with you!"
She turned around to walk away from there
but Bill reached out and he grabbed her hair.
"Oh Bill," she wailed, "just leave me be,
you've too good a heart to love a girl like me."
He said, "But my hearts been took, been took by you!
You love me, girl, I know you do."
"But I don't, I led you false," she cried,
"Because I lied, Billy boy, I lied."
On the harbour wall he stood alone
Above the sea, far away from home
and not a single thing 'cept a silver ring
had he left when love had flown.
Well, the tavern called and it called out loud,
Bill drowned his sorrows with a raucous crowd:
it pulled him in with its vice and sin
and he heartily drank until his legs gave in.
Down he fell upon an empty chair
and fell right down beside a captain there.
"What you doing here, lad?" The captain mused.
"My heart's been broke, sir, its battered and bruised."
The tavern hushed to hear the sorry tale
of a love held true and a heart's betrayal;
each ear pricked, every one to a man —
'Cos nothing holds minds like a story can—
and the captain listened like all the rest
and he closed his eyes and he tapped his chest,
for he'd long lost count of the many scores
of times he had heard this tale before.
And the captain said, "Come sail with me!
I've the best damned ship upon the sea
you'll fit in fine with this crew of mine
aboard the Lady Lee.
Now, it might've been the humid night —
or the ale and rum on a love lorn plight—
but, Bill, he could not think so clear
on that dreadful night he'd lost his love so dear.
And he climbed aboard a strange old ship,
a brigantine, for a long, long trip.
Off he sailed on the midnight tide
with a promise of adventure and a wild ride.
Well, far out at sea the thunder clapped,
the stars went out and the sky turned black
but not a raging wind or a swelling sea
could ever harm a ship like the Lady Lee.
Songs are sung and stories told
of ghostly ships and troubled souls
called to the oceans for eternity
when the captain says, "Come sail with me."
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I hope to high heaven I be, the very first soul to sail this poetic sea .. but if by chance I’m pipped at the post be sure I loved this epic the most ..
You may not post that often these days but when you do, you always amaze .. x
You are indeed the first to sail this poetic sea, young man.
Glad you like it. This has been clogging my neurons up for ages xx
Maybe a question of better out than in .. but that doesn’t stop one from wondering .. 🤞🍒🍓🍷👍xx
Lol!
Well look at that... just popped on and caught you. This could be a story poem even a ballad Tina... I imagine it sung by the very drunken sailors it refers to honestly... it could be put to music. Excellent rhyming ... I love it. As Neville says... you don't pop on often but when you do you are soooooo well worth the wait... PS... fab to see you back ..hugs xx
Awww Marion! Thankyou! This thing started out as a song. But I just couldn't get it right. It's been lodged in my head blocking me from doing anything else. I gave up on the song and made a poem instead. It was needing to come out but stuck fast. Constipation of the brain!
Hopefully other things will start to come to me now the blockage has passed!
Thankyou for reading and hugs back xx
Honestly when I read it I thought it read like lyrics honestly... it does read like lyrics or a poem. I'm.glad you're writing and posting it's always lush to see you on here 💕
Aww thankyou xx
I do love a good story!
Hey storyteller, I really enjoyed this one. Hi Tina.
B
Hi Bernadete, so very happy you like it! Its taken a while to get this one out so I truly appreciate you taking the time to read it xx
Really love this one Tina, Glad I checked up on you, your work is always something to enjoy. Hope you've been well~
So glad you like it Max! It has taken me ages to get out. Got there in the end xx
And yet I’m so glad you shared~
Beautiful work!
Thankyou, John, so glad you like it x
A worthy tale to tell many a broken heart of man's hopelessness without a womans love, we truly are lost without.
I think, perhaps, that without love we are all at least a little lost.
Thankyou, Nine Eleven, for reading. I truly appreciate it, and your comment, more importantly it has alerted me to your outstanding work. Thankyou x
Dear Tina,
Yo ho ho in a bottle of rum
This great ode deserves the roll of a drum.
Peace and love,
Larry xxx
Thanks for taking the time to read. Hope life is treating you well x
Love this! Xx
Aww, so glad you like it. Thankyou, my poetic brother, for taking the time to read it x
Outstanding writing dearest Tina, for the flow the theme and the imagery, kudos. 🌹
What a lovely thing to say! You are very kind, thankyou Shirley. I'm really glad you like it. Thanks again x
Good narrative, the old story of love lost as a reason to leave the lands and take to the sea (wouldn't work for me, last two times on the ocean were terrible 🌊😱😭🤣) Please keep doing this
Hi John! So glad uou like it. I do enjoy writing this sort of stuff. I thankyou, most sincerely, for taking the time to read and leaving your fabulous comment x
Superb Tina. I love your ability to tell a story while maintaining a fantastic flow.
Thankyou very much, Ian. I really appreciate that. I love stories, I've always loved them, and poems that tell a story are my absolute favourite poems x