Poem -
Displacement
Displacement when I worked hard to imprint and belong.
No matter how I listened to instruction I always get it wrong.Β
Feels like the whole world disagrees with my personal stance.Β
Out to kill me, never stood a chance.Β
Displacement how lost are you, ready to go into uncharted, or failure to get started.Β
Organization never a strong suit, I'm sorry I'm not astute.Β
I simply wanted to finish what I started.Β
To help in an effort for a duel place.Β
But effort only brought distance, how can belonging grow in an abandoned society.Β
Please tell me.Β
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Comments
LILIANA!!....this may be the most poetic of your poems (that I have read) of late....the rhyming that you have crafted so cleverly with rhymes in the middle of lines and the ends of phrases.......keeps the momentum of the whole moving forward and certainly gives a shine to the whole......which helps drive home the whole idea of "Displacement" or simply feeling out of place in one's immediate environment!!.....Regardless, a truly fine point deserving of the poetic light you have cast upon it here!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
Struggling to belong and believe that you are worthy has its challenges and concerns indeed.Β
Sometimes it's difficult to make sense of what you want.Β
Heartfelt Liliana....you are not alone in your thoughts my friend. It seems to me the most successful people are often( not always) the least caring or principled...but that's in the wider world. Sometimes we can feel abandoned by life itself, lost and cold. Sometimes I think emotions and feelings are a curse...hugs xx
Indeed that be true.Β
A hand in solis, a shoulder of burden, a softΒ surrounding wind breaths a thought of immortality.Β
I can totally relate to this one Liliana. I've struggled my whole life to fit in. a well-written piece!
All unicorns are valuable in society, as a sea of the same is way too boring.
Keep being unique and staying who you are , and eventually the ones who will care, will arrive and always be there.Β