DON'T JUDGE ME
Some people spend a lifetime
In their world of hierarchy
Passing judgement; passing over
What weâre really meant to be
Act subhuman; or so perfect
That we hold our heads too high
Cannot see the lives around us
Or the hurt thatâs passing by
Life is for forgiving
Not to hold our heads in shame
The turmoil of our past cruel lives
Preclude us; make us lame
Holding on to hidden secrets
Choked and gagged by lonely fears
Gripped by what life throws at us
So desperate to stay near
To what we know and what weâre scared of
Stay secure in distant past
But the loneliness just cripples you
âTil the feeling cannot last
More compassion; understanding
For some sad and tortured souls
Who all that ever want in life
To reach their personal goals
Be happy and be peaceful
Smile and be set free
From their own internal battle ground
All they need is us to see
So when we sit in our glass houses
Spending time just throwing stones
Remember weâre ALL human
Not a world of heartless clones .......
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Rachel! Â Excellent write! Â I've never lived in a glass house but have certainly had folks throwing stones at me from one!Â
val
Ha ha, thanks Val! Â You know what I think we all have but sometimes I don't think we realise just how guilty we all can be of chucking the odd stone even in passing flippent comments or thoughtless comments. Perhaps in life we all should be a little less judgemental. Â Not meaning to sound like a girl from the 60's but 'make love not war' sounds like a damn fine idea ha ha ha! Â Cheers Val:)
Great poem Rachel and very true, if people had a little more compassion the world would be a better ride.
Excellent flow, great but subtle rhyming. TOP CLASS 5*S FROM ME XXXX:)
I like that Jason, the world is a ride and sometimes it's a rollercoaster and sometimes it's like a boat on a calm sea lol!! Â We all should be a little bit more compassionate I guess. Â Thanks for your kind comments Jason and your ever appreciative 5*s :)xxxx
Heya Rachel! You always have a way with words hun...I so enjoy reading your work babe...
P.S....If you get that initiation try to get me in ...lol ...wink x
Ah thanks Carey, your comments I always truly appreciate. Â Will let you know about the initiation as soon as I get any inside info LMAO;)
take a walk in my shoes brilliant write Rachel congrats x
Thanks Susan, your comments are always appreciated :)