The Door to Your Secret Garden
She stood watching curiously
Studying my motives, intentions
Staring as if in the midst of casting a spell;
I’d never ever met someone like her before
Being Just a novice to the game, filled with wanderlust
Longing to enter her secret garden
.
Then something in the air made her smile, and refrain
She became vision in flesh and blood with the scent
Of honey suckle and roses in full bloom,
Blue eyes bleeding pale the colors all around
And my resistance melted at her feet
standing in awe, inhaling
Inhaling the fragrance of her company
And when she smiled at seeing my rise
Standing erect and ready for her tender touch
She bent down in obedience to my carnal will;
Eyes closed and purposeful movement;
Devouring ice cream like it was the hottest day of the year
Yet I knew there was a price for her salvation
In one hand she held a dove,
The other she released a raven
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Comments
Holy Crap Mamma Jamma!!...........this is a gorgeous write.........one of the BEST poems I've read that have the Pic as supportive content..........the last two lines blew me away brother...........gorgeous piece...........absolute poetic sculpture.........love it!! 5*s FAV ..........love and rockets!!.......T xx
Great poem! Goose bumps!
Absolutely loved it Chris! Keep up the great work 5 stars and a favorite from me!!!
Keishia, you are too kind thank you for reading
Tony why are you so nice to me? I know we're brothers and all but you don't have to say all that! Nah man even the most arrogant s.o.b on the planet needs some love too, appreciate the encouragement (I must've edited this baby about a thousand times; started off rough lol...) what you doin tonight?
Melissa you are without a doubt the sweetest person on this planet; okay def. top 3 or 4, thank you my friend for all that
I'm a much bigger fan of you, but thanks sis. yeah this one didn't start off so well; had to keep editing until I liked and understood where I was going with it, ode to not posting something until you completely understand it yourself lol, oh well, I'm still learning....gosh you do say the sweetest things, Cherie, I'm so glad you're back for all the things you are, hey you and T are 'the dynamic duo of love' lol, oh men how cheezy can I get? It is honestly so good to see your smiling face again sis. never mind my silliness, and thanks for encouragement as well, hope all is well with you
Lol, sounds like we will both need 'counselling' after writing poetry on the net, kidding I do enjoy the 'creative process' I remember at one point in the past, panicking and stressing myself for not having something 'good' to write; certainly not so now, if I don't enjoy writing I simply won't write, lucky for me that I enjoy reading as much as writing these days, and that has actually helped me become better; writing less reading more, ironic or what? But I feel blessed, not stressed :D