Double
(Lockdown)
Finding it hard to think.
Finding it hard to speak
Trying to talk but the words that I sought just fall to pieces.
As I breath.
Making the same mistakes
Worrying everyday
Lessons learned and the world it turns
But they still fall back on me.
Listening to their song
- A melody so soft
It`s hard to breath underwater
It`s hard to carry on
But together we are 2
Double the power, me and you
Double the strength to hold on to
Double for me and you
But together we hold on
Fight and sing their song
When we are safe, we surely belong
Double for me and you
The Tidal wave breached the shore.
I don`t want to write about it yet.
I don`t want to think about it soon.
Hold me close from houses apart.
Double for me and you.
The Fish of the Sea
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Much like a song, quite smooth. But no sure if I get its meaning right: 1+1=2 math for kids ;-)>
Actually 1+1 > 2 could if having kids.
Thanks, Yiyan ;)! It did just pop into my head from a song, but no clue where it's from yet lol. And Nah, lockdown just got announced today, Joys... more a tribute to my SO Luma and perseverance in grim times... Least I finished my exams! Hope they still get marked... Kind regards. TFOTS
I felt the cohesion! nice write Max and Fish!.............. your friend !....Jim .....................what was your zip code? lol!  864 Huon Rd. 7000 Tas
Thanks, Jim! And try this one for size 4803! I think you will find it quite humorous. Kind regards. TFOTS
Funny fish , now give me the one for Max! you know we would be stronger as a team of two if I knew that zip!...........kind regards,Jim!....PS it really is a great write!............Jim
XD maybe this one 2325 Quorrobolong longest name I could find in short notice lol
But then again maybe lockdown gives it away....XD
Okay! something to go on! how are we going to co-write next year if your're going to be so aloof!?.....Joking!  oh! another clue!....joking! do I have to say that every time? joking! XD XD XD! The lock down is reported to be in N. Tas! XD
XD, gotta kinda stay anonymous at least, always have time for the Comos! One day at a time ;) hard to write underwater, bring your snorkels! XD, I always know when your Joking Jim
Hey FISH!!.....I TOTALLY feel you here my friend....at least I'd like to think so...BUT.....there's an allegory going on here that I am not privy too....or perhaps I just can't understand......regardless, my interpretation of this write is a worried mind in flux with the pandemic at its forefront ....and for me....it's ~ #1.) Man-made
#2.) Controlled by men #3.) going to be resolved in some glorious fashion (deception abounding) #4.) to prepare the "New Reality"......It's happened in history before....it will happen again.....you have your youth?.......If so, NOT TO WORRY!!.....the world will once again be spinning in greased grooves!!.....cool write!!.....ALL STARS!!.....Peace Out!!.......T xo : )
Wow Tony! I find it so very touching for you to try and break down my work, I can really see where your coming from! It's really impressive how you make connections in my work, sometimes before I realise them. But yes in lockdown now, hope it's not for too long... thanks for your kind comment! Sorry I didnt fully cover your question, poems are up to interpretation anyway. All smiles. Stay safe. TFOTSÂ
Nice write Fish..of the Sea
Thank you so much Lorris, your comments always mean a lot. Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
great hope in times of adversity shows in this wonderful poem.
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Aww thanks Liliana, haven't been writing as recently as I would have liked at the moment but what can you do? Best wishes