Dream.... no feeling
FREESTYLE AFTER READING TWO POEMS. WILL NOT BE EDITED OR CORRECTED. SORRY FOR ANY ERRORS.
THERE'SA DARKNESS ALL AROUND. IT'S DEEP IT'S HEAVY, BEYOND PROFOUND. I HAVE FELT LOST AND OFTEN ALINE BUY TRUTH I'VE NEVER BEEN. I'VE LIVED WITH LIES AND LIVED WITH SIN BUT I CANNOT FATHOM WHAT YOU FEEL WITHIN. I HEAR YOUR SCREAMS. THE SORROW YOU DON'T SHOW. THERE IS A REASON THAT YOU'D GO. IT WAS NEVER EXPRESSED AS YOU YOURSELF DIDN'T KNOW. THE NOISE IN YOUR MIND LIKE A SCRAMBLED TV. REMINDS ME OF HOW I USE TO BE. DEMON-ANGEL-HEAVEN-HELL PLACES AND CREATURES I KNOW TO WELL. BUT FOR SOME STRANGE REASON I REMAIN STAGNENT. I HEAR AD SEE YOUR WORDS, ARE THEY YOUR OWN? YOUR LIFES MISSON -A COMMANDMENT. THERE IS KNOWLEDGE TO BE SOUGHT-MUCH TO BE TAUGHT. SHOULD YOU BELIEVE OR SHOULD YOU NOT.
I HAVE BUT ONE SINGLE MESSAGE FOE YOU AT THIS TIME. THAT WITHIN THESE WORDS AND WITHIN THIS RHYME I PROVIDE YOU A READING, YOUR LIFE'S DEPLETING. YOUR SOUL IS RING PULLED APART. SOMETHING YOU MUST STOP AND STOP NOW BEFORE IT REALLY STARTS.
MANON PEEL
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Here is the corrected copy.
THERE'S A DARKNESS ALL AROUND. IT'S DEEP IT'S HEAVY, BEYOND PROFOUND.
I HAVE FELT LOST AND OFTEN ALONE BUT TRUTH;
I'VE NEVER BEEN.
I'VE LIVED WITH LIES AND LIVED WITH SIN,
BUT I CANNOT FATHOM WHAT YOU FEEL WITHIN.
I HEAR YOUR SCREAMS.
THE SORROW YOU DON'T SHOW.
THERE IS A REASON THAT YOU DID GO.
IT WAS NEVER EXPRESSED AS YOU YOURSELF DIDN'T KNOW.
THE NOISE IN YOUR MIND LIKE A SCRAMBLED TV.
REMINDS ME OF HOW I USE TO BE. DEMON-ANGEL-HEAVEN-HELL PLACES AND CREATURES I KNOW TO WELL. BUT FOR SOME STRANGE REASON I REMAIN STAGNENT.
I HEAR AND SEE YOUR WORDS, ARE THEY YOUR OWN? YOUR LIFES MISSON -A COMMANDMENT?
THERE IS KNOWLEDGE TO BE SOUGHT-MUCH TO BE TAUGHT.
SHOULD YOU BELIEVE OR SHOULD YOU NOT!
I HAVE BUT ONE SINGLE MESSAGE FOR YOU AT THIS TIME.
THAT WITHIN THESE WORDS AND WITHIN THIS RHYME,
I PROVIDE YOU A READING, YOUR LIFE'S DEPLETING.
YOUR SOUL IS BEING PULLED APART. SOMETHING YOU MUST STOP AND STOP NOW BEFORE IT REALLY STARTS.
MANON PEEL aka Wolf Soul.
Eclectic, electric, roaming-rhyme. Good piece with plenty of attitude.
Like I said. It's what I felt after reading only two of your pieces. I know I probably sounded like a cimplete bitch on transient, it wasn't meant to.
I was getting some messed up messages.
Oh yes, I have a lot of attitude. I'm glad you liked it.
Wolf