Poem - 28 January 2014, 12:43 Contest Nominees Drifting Away... Jason Lee I used to think I knew you Within a heartbeat our gravity changed I feel like we're drifting away.... Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1804 Rating: Total votes: 4 Poetry Genre: Haiku Listed in: Contest Entries 12 comments
Jai Masters28 January 2014, 12:53 alot in here these 3 lines A magnitude of agony this is well scribed Jason and I hope all is well by you, best wishes Jai :) Reply
Jason Lee29 January 2014, 01:02 Yeah I'm great dude thanks, there's been a lot of haiku's on here lately so I thought I'd have a bash lol :) Reply
Jason Lee29 January 2014, 05:01 Haha cheers Carey they're harder than I thought lol, glad you liked :) Reply
Carey Milton29 January 2014, 05:04 Now give us a haiku acrostic lol I went with an animal theme myself..it was fun :) Reply
Carey Milton29 January 2014, 05:12 E ye am watching you Y ou better keep your word mate.. E nthusiastic! LOL Reply
Jason Lee29 January 2014, 05:33 Haha how's that Miss Milton ;) S-exual gratification E-xcitement is building X-treme satisfaction guaranteed.. Reply
BLOSSOM30 January 2014, 09:15 A great Haiku Jason, I really liked this. Might give one a go myself one day, trouble with me I'll probably put too many lines in it LOL! Loved the image btw:) x Reply
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alot in here these 3 lines
A magnitude of agony this is well scribed Jason
and I hope all is well by you,
best wishes Jai :)
Yeah I'm great dude thanks, there's been a lot of haiku's on here lately so I thought I'd have a bash lol :)
Nice Jason..get on the haiku train x I like this one matey!
Haha cheers Carey they're harder than I thought lol, glad you liked :)
Now give us a haiku acrostic lol I went with an animal theme myself..it was fun :)
Hmmm watch this space ;)
E ye am watching you
Y ou better keep your word mate..
E nthusiastic!
LOL
LOL I promise :)
Haha how's that Miss Milton ;)
S-exual gratification
E-xcitement is building
X-treme satisfaction guaranteed..
Gold mate and in under 10 minutes! x lol x love it
10 mins is a loooong time to me Carey ;)
A great Haiku Jason, I really liked this. Might give one a go myself one day, trouble with me I'll probably put too many lines in it LOL! Loved the image btw:) x