Poem -
Empty Costume...
My god!
Please, NO!
Black mist
Overshadows,
You grotesque
Human being,
Now in life
I'm a walking ghost!
Eyes
Have turned black
Mind
Is a thickened memory
Image
A blurry vision
Of who I used to be
You monster
You deserved
More than prison
I could kill you
And bury your poison
Still
That horrendous moment looms
Still
Slumped, left like an empty costume
Still....
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
When you go through something as profoundly life-changing as rape or some kind of traumatic abuse you definitely can relate to words such as ~
~ "Now in life I'm a walking ghost!
Eyes ~ have turned black
Mind ~ is a thickened memory.."
That is fantastically accurate and truly creative at the same time!!......PINNED this one my friend!!........ Excellent write WAYNE!!....... Bravo!! ?????.........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?
Wow!! What a comment thanks for pin pointing lines out! You're are so kind and supportive to my work Tony! ???? it's a hard subject matter but as you I like to push the boundaries of what we can speak about to make things better ???☮? brother! ?
Thanks Greg ??
Thanks Terry Reeves ??