And, when we fade away from distant land,
Who will share our love, and hold our hand?
For our clod is mere, adrift on this mortal sphere,
And, when we fade away, who will hold us dear?
I feel a little bad, because I haven't taken enough time to give others feedback. Only, i'm just using this as a place to keep all my poems at this moment in time. Once I'm not tied up in the lightening speeds of life, I shall be sure to return the favour when I have more time.
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I love this! I live the wording a D the way it flows and rhymes. The question asked is a worthy one x
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments.
I feel a little bad, because I haven't taken enough time to give others feedback. Only, i'm just using this as a place to keep all my poems at this moment in time. Once I'm not tied up in the lightening speeds of life, I shall be sure to return the favour when I have more time.
Thank you again x