Equine Swell
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Turbulence crashes ashore
Commissioned evermore
Salty foam in a wake
Relish lees in a break
Glide on crescent tide
Aqueous equine astride
Thunder amber sands
BridleΒ pelagic expands
frothy stallion clave
Ferine tis storm lave
Brine kist canter flow
Incites an undertow
Selene goddess moon
Lunar phased croon
AudaciousΒ lofty vendor
Incite neon splendor
Dusky azure slew
Oscillate multi-hue
Elemental minor chord
ChaosΒ chases in accord
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Comments
Β Wow!The painting and poem flow in awesome splendor! missed you! .......Jim
thank you Jim!
Brilliant writing POETESSDARKLY so imaginative and flowing.
Literally like, near overlapping text, a constant relentless stream like a tsunami of beautiful words with no commas, full stops or pauses of any kind.
Constantly and powerfully moving forwards.
So well conceived and presented and seamlessly dovetails together.
And your choice of image mirrors perfectly your captivating poem.
Reminds me of the old Guinness advert.
Beguiling writing and a real joy to read from beginning to end.
Always a fan of less is more and short and punchy uncluttered use of words.
A poem that doesn't take the long winded approach, but one that cuts to the poetic chase.
Thank you for writing a touch of class and again thank you for your Soldier's Noel poem.
One of my favourites on here.
It's late now here in Cardiff but back tomorrow to read more of yours and to enjoy and learn from.
Pure class and I hope all is well with you and the loved ones around you.
Nos da POETESSDARKLY and thanking you once more.
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thank so much Shaun
wow awsome poem LisaΒ Β
thank you Greg!
Lovely work Lisa π·π·
thank you so much Marion