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Erroneously We

author
Steve Green
Erroneously We

Bad thoughts..

Bad deeds..

Consequence..

Remorse..

Redemption..

Life is series
of mostly correctable mistakes
that leads to wisdom
eventually..

Hopefully?

Maybe??

We can stop riding this error cycle..

In theory anyway
 

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Mistake
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Reality
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Marion

I am very much enjoying your writes lately Mr Green...thanks for sharing them 😊 x

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