Poem -
ESCAPE THIS BUBBLE !?X
IM TRYING TO BREAK OUT OF THIS BUBBLE
COS, INSIDE IT, IS NOTHING BUT TROUBLE
ONLY DOUBT & FEELINGS OF BEING SO GULLIBLE
NOTHING INSIDE HERE IS REAL
IF IT DOESN,T ALLOW ME TO FEEL
I JUST NEED TO BREAK THE SEAL
LET ME DISCOVER, WHAT IS REAL
IT LOOK,S SO DELICATE TO BREAK
BUT FEELS LIKE WALLS OF STEEL
IF I CANT ESCAPE & MAKE
MY LIFE FROM TRAPPED TO REAL
I,LL BE STUCK LIKE THIS FOREVER
& NEVER BE ABLE TO FEEL
Tracy Timothy xx
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I love this its short catchy and has a good feel for someone who likes to write similar poems. This had a good ring, great write!
Onlooker
Agreed with onlooker,
great write shot gun short but sweet,xoxo
"I JUST NEED TO BREAK THE SEAL
LET ME DISCOVER, WHAT IS REAL
IT LOOK,S SO DELICATE TO BREAK
BUT FEELS LIKE WALLS OF STEEL
IF I CANT ESCAPE & MAKE
MY LIFE FROM TRAPPED TO REAL
I,LL BE STUCK LIKE THIS FOREVER
& NEVER BE ABLE TO FEEL"
love ya heaps xx
wow thanks once again nardine you are fast becoming my no.1 fan lol x
Proud to be, :) xoxo
thank you so much Mr curious x