Poem -
Evermore...
A personal challenge to write my very first love piece...Here it is!!
To be lost in his embrace
Evermore...
To hear his heartbeat
Evermore...
To succumb to his touch
Evermore...
Enchanted by his grace
Evermore...
And be kissed passionately
Evermore...
Awaken hungry desires
Evermore...
And enjoy sensual pleasures
Evermore...
And saviour wild kisses
Evermore...
And see his delight
Evermore...
And joy on his face
Evermore...
To be breathless
Evermore...
As he holds me tight
Evermore...
And be in that moment
Evermore...
Transported away
Evermore...
Adrift in bliss
Evermore...
Love Everlasting...
Forevermore...
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Comments
Fantastic, but now your stuck with him..... Pratibha...
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Charles that just had me in stitches lol. In my head I was thinking yes too right I am lol!!! Thanks for visiting!! Px?
Pratibha never thought you had in you! Love is in the heart of everything, definitely put a smile on my face. A lovely poem, well thought out and executed. Can we expect more? For Evemore....?
Hi Saf. Thank you thank you for the positive comments. Yes I did it.....your favourite genre!! I didnt realise I could either lol. Yes in future can expect more...forevermore!!
Thanks for the pin. Px ?
Beautiful write Pratibha, I love the way you have written it and the repeat gives it a magical as well as passionate quality...cracking!! As we say in Wales!!! Hugs ?
Hi Marion. Oh thank you. I have been quite surprised it has been received so well! Cracking you say! Glad you liked the structure of it. It just started flowing like that and I knew how I wanted it laid out. Appreciative your comments and votes. Big hugs ? Px ?
Have voted...seems there are problems again...Jesus...sort it out Cosmo!!
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Oh well done, Pratibha! This is really lovely! I love it x
Thank you Tina. Soo good to get your opinion...good or bad...need critique in a new area! Px
Hi Pratibha,
Enjoyed reading - you have the formula!
Congrats,
Love, Terry.
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Thank you Terry. Most appreciative. Good to know this from you when it's an area which I dont write about. Not my genre. Px
this poem will
always be
for evermore
your masterpice
Lol thank you Greg!! Great comment!! Px ?
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wonderful write that goes with the great pic indeed! rock
Thank you very much! Px
Love the way you have wrote "evermore" precise and so easy to digest like it a lot x
Wow thank you Keith for reading and even looking back to find it. I really appreciate the comments. Good to know its written well enough for my first love piece. I'm looking fwd to reading some of your writes. Px💜
I try n look back as there's so many to catch up on lol
Lol I'm the same!! I've done that too!! Cos it's not everyday I can get on here!!
I'd be on a the time if we could stop time x
Pratibha he sounds a good man with a good heart, a real keeper and
one not to lose.
Your poem of love poem says it all and then ending on love eternal is inspiring writing to read.
I didn't see that coming. Superb!
Thanks for sharing something unique Pratibha and keep writing and I'll keep reading. x.
Lol!! Aaaww thanks for reading my first love piece.
glad you liked my spiritual ending....its so fascinating to learn u didnt expect that ending..😁
I am writing so post something new and to catch up.on reading!
Px 😁🙏🏽