Poem - 23 April 2022, 14:23 every now and then Dusk Arising she is gone and somewhere every now and again a breeze catches my face and her song lingers on Like 2 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 615 Rating: Total votes: 2 Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Love Listed in: Contest Entries 5 comments
Dusk Arising24 April 2022, 10:19 Thank you. Yes i find short pieces are so punchy and give the reader so much to paint their own mind pictures with. Sadly I can't create them often. Reply
Neville24 April 2022, 05:06 You wrote it so well, that so many of us feel it so acutely and truly .. N Reply
Neville24 April 2022, 05:08 You wrote it so bloomin well sir .. I dont doubt that so many will subsequently feel it acutely and truly .. N Reply
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So much said in so few line x
Thank you. Yes i find short pieces are so punchy and give the reader so much to paint their own mind pictures with. Sadly I can't create them often.
You wrote it so well, that so many of us feel it so acutely and truly .. N
You wrote it so bloomin well sir .. I dont doubt that so many will subsequently feel it acutely and truly .. N
Thanks Neville. What better hope could a poet ask for.