Poem -
Excited Desperation
Running all day long
Jump up
Fiddle sticks
Riddle tricks
They Tickle me
Lovestruck
It cant beΒ
You seeing me
Can`t believeΒ
Blood pumps
They're telling me.
Got a tendency.
Don`t look at me.
No can`t be seen.
No can`t be seen
Their eyes are killing me
In a world more like a dream
Defeating not inspiring!
Hell if I had a chance,
I`d stop this at last.
No chance
No chance
What`s all the fuss
With a head just buzzing,
In a world that`s laughing,
Don`t remember half a thing
And these thoughts
These thoughts
Still still coming in
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
phenomenal write FishΒ
Aww thanks so much, Lisa, just came to me in my break time lol. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Gorgeous write! It puts a smile on my face, one I cant wipe off. Mind you I got a strange look from my friend when i just burst out smiling but its a truly gorgeous poem.
Awww thanks so much, Bell! that really means a lot coming from you! And XD lol, you should show them! Thanks for your really special comment, it's so very appreciated. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Chaos anxiety fear...is it the fish in the picture dying or the the man behind the words crying?? Regardless, I sense a much deeper meaning behind this...one that disturbs? Good write π
Yep, like crying (on the inside) so much you end up laughing at the frivolousness of it all. But no matter, I`m alright, just a spell when I wrote it. Thanks so much for you kind comment Marion, they always lift me up that little bit extra. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Truth and honestly come easy to you congratulations on your true heart. Soldier on, head high.Β
Awww thanks so much, Liliana. I try ;)... but like everyone I still have secrets... Thanks again for your kind comment, they are always really appreciated. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
what great poemΒ
i should read more of your
workΒ
Awww thanks so much, Greg, it really means so much that you took the time with your kind comment. Your more than welcome to have a look! I know its not everyone's cup of tea though... Kind regards. All the best to you. The Fish of the Sea.
beautiful witty and has a rhthym that makes me think of the insouciance of the french . esp my french mateΒ
made me smile broadlyΒ
Wow, that's such an interesting take on things Evrod! But thanks so much for the kind comment. Made Bell smile too Lol!Β It really means so much. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.