Excuse Me

What's up Nathenial?

Wonderfully written and rhymed, poem very  calculatively thought out verses....Job very well done, although the entire poem spoke highly of the skills of the poet.......Lines of interest, is as follows...

Sincerely,

Jim

A fly landed
On a piece of cheese
Open handed
It let out a sneeze

         &

Adjusting wings
The fly took it's leave
With what life brings
Strange what we believe

Hey Nate,

I reserve the right to thank you my friend, This poem is one of unique qualities and every line of it hit home...I can honestly say that this was a brilliant poem Nate and catchy. One of your key words as your poem locator was,( amusing) and that it definitely was and another was that it was goofy, on the contrary Nate, this was as clever and very calculative my friend and if all the rest is as such, I will enjoy walking through the garden of your poetic justice, plucking poem after poem for the reading.....I normally introduce poems to a juvenile facility which I frequent and read some of their poetry and would love to borrow this one if you don't mind, to present to them, the mind of a poet at work. They will get a kick out of this one…I surely did….This was a brilliant poem in my book…..Take Care Dear Sir and plan to, (as stated), stop by your garden of poetry to quench the appetite…

Jim