Poem - 05 October 2022, 08:43 Excuse Me I Love You She Said Neville Excuse me, I love you she said but pray treat me gentle .. I may not be fragile or precious in the classical sense .. Yet I can be awfully dangerous when frightened, abused or provoked .. Like 4 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 550 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Brevity Truth Women Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Jim "The Lad" ....05 October 2022, 12:43 don't molest the cubs or pay the ultimate price! cool write sir Neville!..............................................Jim Reply
Neville08 October 2022, 00:00 Absolutely Jim, the cubs are safe with me sir .. Many thanks for the thumbs up :) Reply
Gwendoline06 October 2022, 09:21 “Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned” That’s what popped into my head when I read this. Great writing and loving the structure. You are gifted at bringing to life conversational pieces. The moment really lifts off the page and into the minds eye Gwen x Reply
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don't molest the cubs or pay the ultimate price! cool write sir Neville!..............................................Jim
Absolutely Jim, the cubs are safe with me sir .. Many thanks for the thumbs up :)
“Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned” That’s what popped into my head when I read this. Great writing and loving the structure. You are gifted at bringing to life conversational pieces. The moment really lifts off the page and into the minds eye
Gwen x
You are quite write about hell Gwen ......... Neville x