Poem -
F l a g e l l a t e
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Mature single
Woman
Sexy
Sassy
Sorry for nothing
Tie me up
Hold me down
WhIp
Flagellate
Consummate
Performer
Cherry vodka
Knee high boots
Tiger in the bedroom
Mermaid in the bathtub
sEEkiNg
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Comments
The way you spell seeking and whip is clever and shows the reader the central points of your piece. The poem cuts out everything that is unessential. I like.
Soon I will be reading
itchy and scratchy :)
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well that's right I'm trying
to get to the point
And even leaving the point behind
so that the whipping
is the important process
what happens after that
is anybody's guess
and I thank you for your review
I don't think we met before
thank you for your read an interesting comment -
Let me look for your poem itchy and scratchy :))))