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Fading Away

Fading Away

Life is slowly fading away like smoke into thin air

You’re here today….tomorrow you’re no longer here

Time waits for no one… it is flying fast…at the speed of light
Don’t waste time…don’t live in futility…don’t be lazy…hard work doesn’t bite 

Do what you can…when you can…while you can…put a smile on someone’s face today 
Why wait until tomorrow? Whoever says you can have tomorrow your way?  

Life is an illusion…don’t take it too seriously…you’d be in trouble
Life is real…don’t take is as a joke…you’d be in more than trouble

It’s like a wilting flower, Beautiful in the morning and gone by midday
Dreams only come true if you make them to anyway

It’s slowly fading away like cloud after a rainfall
Be careful how you live…..your life would be accounted for

It’s slowing fading away like stars 
Be the reason someone is living….never let anyone down

It’s only what you’ve done that would remembered
Leave your footprints on the sand of time and a lasting legacy altogether

Who would have the vaguest idea of those dreams that never materialized?
Who would know what you planned or intended but was never realized? 

Be careful….be warned……life is slowing fading away

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Georgina Richardson

Hi my little Rose,

This truly is a beautiful piece and it`s packed with very sound advice and from someone so young too. Well done sweetie for this piece I really enjoyed reading it. All who read this will appreciate the wisdom of your words. I`m proud of my little Rose, well done sweetie.

Love G xx

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Rose Sho

Aww!....you made me blushed.....It's rewarding to know you enjoyed it....I'm honoured.....Thanks so much.....I hope to do more.

Hugs:)..your little Rose

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Tony Taylor

Hey ROSE!!.....I like the way you formatted this write..... breaking your different pieces of poetic advice into stanza's....VERY clever!!...... and delivering some beautiful inspiration for doing the right thing in this life..... and appreciating just how fast it all goes by..... lovely, caring, poetry my friend!!.......ALL STARS...... well done sister girl!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS ......T xo

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Rose Sho

Hey Tony......you've just made my day.…thanks for your words.

Lots of love...

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Jimmy Arnold

Rose,

You speak the words, the soul (without tongue), is forced to keep silent but to(a soul), that would pay a handsome ransom, if those words were to spread,(world wide).....You are a kindred spirit my friend who wishes the best for all even if the odds were not in their favor and whom thought "not," such as yourself, that all things are good, be they great are small....Love this piece.. Every word held a positive meaning..Jim   

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Rose Sho

Thanks so much for loving my piece...It's rewarding to know you enjoyed it....I really appreciate

Lots of love

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