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Fading Whispers

Fading Whispers

Sand never settles it sweeps Ocean's stage,
and stirs up a moment where deep waters rage.
From dust, two return with their feet on the grain,
this love won't be tarnished by Sea's deadly chain.

Out in the distance they reach from beyond,
if loved quelled existence it won't part this bond.
An undying passion that breezes the grave,
as echoes of laughter break through every wave.

Their gaze ever holding, this place holds no time,
with both never knowing they're victims of crime.
A slumber awoken as each take in breath,
desire but a whisper not tainted by death.

For even the depths won't give up on their own,
whenever you hear Sea's faint mystical tone.
As soon as the tide washes over the shore,
You'll hear fading whispers behind Ocean's door. 

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Bryan Delorme

Very well written... I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
 

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Lost

You chose the ocean and it flows like water. It's beautiful

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Richard Waters

Beautiful undercurrent of engrossing sentimentality and depths of meaningful rationality underpin this captivating charged work. Great phrasing and structure raise its worth and potency.
You write with aplomb and confidence creating works of real merit.
Thanks for sharing.
:)

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Susan Chetcuti

Hi Richard. I was looking back on a few of my poems and realized you had commented on this one, Fading Whispers. I'm so sorry I missed your review. I' am so happy that you regarded it with such high value. I really appreciate such kind words, thanks again.

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