THE FALL OF HADES....

On the dark side of the sun
The rains are eternal
Yet no rivers run
Dormant shadows
Continue to grow
Creating new craters
Halting energy's flow
This constant eclipse
Of an unevolved realm
Is where darkness is cast
From Hades hands
At the helm..
Toxic winds
Are blown from his breath.....
As his jaws open wide
Shouting whispers of death
But these screaming gales
Fall upon naught
For these wasted horizons
Once black...
Are now brought
Into orbital light
Behold!!
The Great Juggernaut!!.....
The Lord Of The World!!
Would then appear...
On his Chariot of Fire
Blazing horses
He did steer
This courageous saviour
Of all planets and suns...
Gave decay....
New found fear!......
He was bound to succumb
To The One...
Whom unfurled
His reason
For treason
Was the war
Of our world!
Destroyer of seasons!!
But the Juggernaut knew
A nostrum to this spell...
And the very next day
Sun lit Heaven and Hell
Thus life rang once again
From the loudest of bells
Chiming echoes defeat
As Hades fell.......
From the world................
Carey Milton ©

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Dearest Leola
May I firstly just say it is a pleasure to hear from you again :)
As I was reading your reflected inspirational feedback you managed to grasp a little bit of me that I knew was there but gave it a new light..(same meaning)...just adjusted the globe haha x
I feel an inner power that surges through me when I create poetry of fantasy on a 'GRAND' level..
Your words have touched a place within me once again...Thank you...for reading...connecting...and most of all reflecting x:)
Carey
WOW!! Carey, this is truly extraordinary.......Milton is a perfect last name for you........epic writing, the ever evolving battle between dark and light.......and such fantastic storytelling........the picture is perfect........it feels as if it wants to be a trilogy........unbelievable imagery.......the fires and the energy halted....I could rave on and on........it was like uncorking the fires of hell........fantastic write my friend....it..left me wanting more........I love these kinds of writes.........you are an artist kind poetess.......and as an athlete, I'd say you knocked that one right out of the park....well done.........tony xx