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Feeling Down

Feeling Down

He’s down on his luck
 He’s missing you
No one to talk to
 When he’s, feeling blue

His close family gone
 Through the pearly gates 
The emptiness that follows 
​​​​​​ That’s what he hates 

He feels so alone 
​​​​​​ He don’t feel loved 
His reflection in the mirror 
​​​​​​ No warmth just cold 
Its gotta get better 
​​​​​​ He don’t deserve this
Who’s dealing the cards out 
​​​​​​ They’re taking the piss

His luck has to change 
​​​​​​ Another throw of the dice
Make a break from the misery 
​​​​​​ He said,that would be nice 

Make a man happy 
​​​​​​ No living slave
Bring a smile to his face
Before he gets to the grave

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Gwendoline

Gosh..,your words echo for so many, that abandoned sensation once we have lost everyone to death. The emptiness weighs heavy in your words
Well penned
thank you for sharing 
Gwen x

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Marion

Yes as Gwen say...relevant for so many ⚘

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