Poem -
Feeling her Music
every once in a while, I take the time
to listen to the rain coming down
and the familiar sound
is like an orchestra maneuver
playing on earths’ living timber
ascending my spirit to better places
though the sky is dark as one milk in my coffee
the wonder of it all, surrounds me,
baptized afresh, I become
tasting Nirvana dripping from Mother Natures' swollen nipples
moving so softly on my tongue
driven by the ambient wind
I'm feeling her music once again
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Glorious piece which has a delicate touch to admire.
Love it.
Best wishes to you ! :)
thanks Richard, appreciate the comment, I tend to write poetry about nature to put my thoughts in a more relaxed place when I'm stressed, glad you made some a generous comment, appreciate, hope you have great day....cheers
May this day go well for you ! :)
Hello Christopher...
Very peaceful...
Thank you for sharing the ride...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
hello sparrowsong...
glad you found it peaceful, my friend...
at times, I do enjoy sharing...
hugs back
Christopher Correia
thanks for commenting, my friend
You my friend just made me fall deeply in love with rain, nature musicto the soul. I enjoyed reading. Its soothing and your writing embraces beauty of nature. :-)
I love the rain and the flowers that dance
naked and full of grace under the skies' canopy....
hey, if you read this I DEAR YOU TO MAKE A POEM FROM THE LINES ABOVE....thanks B, rain is awesome, high five
the imagery is spectacular! I love your work Christopher
so glad you liked this poem, charlotte and took the time to write down a great comment as well, yeah, I probably like rain in summer, more than most, perhaps, it has a cooling harmonious effect on my soul, thank you for commenting