Final cry

Teetered on the break
I stare into the darkness
void of reflection
Troubled waters of my mind
Abandoned hope
With soul departing
I lie alone,
Recounting days
That hurt the most
The why's the how's
Injustice and pain,
Throat worn tired
Within I scream
Alas this may my final cry
Mustering the word
No begging nor pleading
A solitary word,
I find myself with hope
For now, at this moment
My cry can be heard

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Tidy meaningful composition !
Wishing you all the best ! :)
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Peace and love to you my friend !
Take care. :)