Poem -
Final Curtain
With a tongue like leatherÂ
She gave his face a pink blushÂ
Made no fuss when he turned to leaveÂ
She embraced the final curtainÂ
Certain she now had the strength to be braveÂ
He was free to taste the many fruits he cravedÂ
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Comments
Wow Gwen what an amazing way to convey release...acceptance...goodbye and an all consuming higher love for the loved one whose absence will hurt enormously...'he was free to taste the many fruits he craved' ..outstanding.. and my favourite of yours â¤
Marion wow feedback canât get any better my friend. Thanks so much for seeing all that I attempted to convey in this little piece. So pleased you liked it â¤ď¸
Nice piece of work Gwen
Kieran, lovely to find your words on my work. Many thanks for the like and kind comment. I hope all is wellÂ
Gwen x
excellent poetry Linda
Thanks so much for your kind words Linda x
Greg thanks so much for stopping by. For the like and pin my friend x
Although I never saw that coming, neither did he I bet .. Good riddance I say .. better off without that kind of geeza ...Â
Superbly thought through and worded Gwen ... Jeez .. I bet he's kicking himself now .. and racked with envy at the thought of those left to find you ............................................. I still know a good hit man by the way .. x
Awe Neville you are too kind my friend. Thank goodness he isnât real đ wouldnât want you in trouble on my account. Many many thanks for your fab feedback and the pin xÂ
Eee eck .. I was seriously hoping you wouldn't say that .. He's on his way round write now ............................................................ sorry x
Yikes you waste no time getting the job done! Lol đ x
WOW!!......it's in the succinctness that makes this such a powerful "Fuck Off!"......the final straw!!....the straw that broke the camel's back!!......Brilliantly conveyed dear poet sister......I'm with Neville......I know a hit man!!.....fictitious of course!! (smiles).......PINNED!!.....powerful energy being conveyed here!!......well done!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wowsers such an impactful response my good friend. It is lovely to read you would look out for my well-being :) even if it is all fictitious. Many thanks for this fabulous response and I am so pleased it had such an effect being such a short write too. So happyÂ
many many thanks Tony x
Short but that didnt stop you from getting the point across, so much to convey in this with so few words Gwen, very impressive punch packed poem.Â
Rob thank you so very much. Always such a pleasure to hear your thoughts on poetry xÂ
My Dear Gwendoline,
So much said, in so few words, our heroine at last able to face the final curtain, knowing that in the future, a new one will rise.
Love,
Larry xxx Â
Larry, many thanks indeed for this wonderful uplifting response. Absolutely. It is like that saying. When one door closes, another opens. Thank you for leaving your fabulous words with this pieceÂ
Gwen x
Love it! Glad she gave him "what for" ...excellent poem this is! Xx
Thanks so much Tina. I am glad the impact was felt in such a short poem :) xxÂ
It so very definitely was! Well done xx
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