i wrote this haiku becuase i hate haikus. i hate how little they say and how much they leave to you. i do not want to work for them merely to know what they are, so i strove and strove ot write one that could work for me. that could work for you. and help you to see you, and what you do. without you having to work to read it, merely work to look at yourself after
Its called the fingertips senryu not just because of its subject, but becuase of what it does, how it pushes and guides you, not asking you to start yourself
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this is a great haiku. very creative.
i wrote this haiku becuase i hate haikus. i hate how little they say and how much they leave to you. i do not want to work for them merely to know what they are, so i strove and strove ot write one that could work for me. that could work for you. and help you to see you, and what you do. without you having to work to read it, merely work to look at yourself after
Its called the fingertips senryu not just because of its subject, but becuase of what it does, how it pushes and guides you, not asking you to start yourself
Well I love haikus and I love this one! Nice write.Â
Val âĽď¸
Aaron newbom,
A good Haiku, My vote, My nomination
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