Flatline

Lying on cold pitch with blurred visionÂ
Under the streetlights
Flickering faster than I can recover my focus
I could hear that familiar voice
But no longer cheerful
Icy? No raspy
Words tripping over each otherÂ
High pitch and breaking on some notes
Smiling I muttered, “you never could sing”
Gripping my hand oh so tight
“sniff sniff” smiling through tears my love replied
“I thought you liked my singing”
My grip loosening as my strength dimmedÂ
That raspy voice again
His hand leaving minesÂ
Now on my faceÂ
“ stay with me,”
“hang in there”
“talk to me hunnie”
“they’ll be here soon”
To no response hand falling to the ground
Distance growing between us yet our positionsÂ
Remain untouched.
S.H
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When a love "dies" it does feel a lot like a physical death in many respects, Sarah.
I know.
I've experience it myself.
Well penned...
~Dean
:) thank you dean
Oh so sad, a great description right through, well written Sarah...
Faith
thank you faith always a pleasure hearing from you
sad but lovely write x
aw thank you:)