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Flower three 🌼

Flower three 🌼

Say goodbye. 

I know it's the last time I see you, so let's not make things harder.
  Put glitter on your scars, said that it always was like that,
  Do you really believe that if it looks better it won't fell miserable?

  Walking in the rain again, but this time everyone thinks that I'm ill.
  Don't know what I keep trying to prove...should gave up a long time ago
  Many people around.Fell like i'm in a Zoo...,,Can I have some candies now, dad?"

  Guess I had to get used with losing and finding, but sometimes...
  Why can't someone stay for a bit longer? 

  Longer than grandpa's guitar in the corner  of my room.

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Being Me

Put glitter on your scars,

I like that line. Our scars are part of us, and although they shouldn't define us, they do make us who we are. Scars are an inevitable part of life...maybe we should allow them to sparkle force bit x

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Faded Flower 94

Thank you for reading my work🌼
I was thinking almost the same  while writing it:)...I think our life would be so much easier, if people had been true to themselves and hadn't tried to hide under some surfaces or labels.
 

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Being Me

So true! Forgive me but I forgot to give stars and a like...remedied now though!

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Faded Flower 94

Oh, it's not a big deal since you enjoyed the poem.Everything that I do is for connecting with people and just expressing my own feelings💜Stars and likes are great, but not that important🌼

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Gwendoline

Must agree with what’s been said, our scars remind us of how far we have come. The challenges we already have faced. I liked the reference with the guitar. I have my dads guitar sat in the corner of my bedroom. I will have it for far longer than I had him in my life. So that last part really hit me, and made my eyes well up. Brilliant write 

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Faded Flower 94

Thank you for reading it💛 and my eyes became watery too, after seeing your comment.It means so much to me that my work can make people feel different spectrums of emotions and...maybe leave an impact🌼

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Gwendoline

The power of poetry is a beautiful thing, thanks for sharing yours 🌷

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